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As he approached the bedroom, he could hear the Girl(tm)'s voice. It sounded exactly like it did in all the fantasies of the last two nights, the fantasies Jeremy realized were never fantasies at all. They were the words of his new owner, carried through the signals in her eyes directly into his brain, telling him what he always needed to know all along. "Obedience is pleasure," the Girl(tm) purred. "Obedience is pleasure."
Jeremy could hear Chandra respond each time, her voice a low moan of undisguised lust. "Obedience is pleasure," she gasped, in tones thick with mindless arousal. The touch of the Girl(tm) was teasing her almost beyond endurance, he realized, but he knew that she would always be good for her Girl(tm). "Obedience is pleasure. O-obedience, is...p...pleasure..."
It was only when the stutter changed the pace of her recitation that Jeremy realized he was chanting right along with her as he walked into the room. As he stepped into the fantasy. Then his gaze locked onto the beautiful swirls of color that blazed in the eyes of the Girl(tm), and he sighed in pleasure as he finally allowed himself to stop thinking at all.
THE END
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years ago[quote] submitting to the hypnotic bliss[/quote]
Exactly. It's abundantly clear on night two that the Girl is targeting Jeremy as well -- the reference to the perfectly framed image and Jeremy clearly seeing those eyes makes it very clear.
So I went back and looked at night one. Once the Girl has Chandra "out", she glows her eyes, which would do nothing for Chandra -- but is the start of the "Lets see what triggers this on-looker" phase. After that, she's just trying things and seeing what has an effect; almost certainly noticing how he responded to the physical/comforting care.
This series is an interesting read, watching the Girls spread out, one more victim after another, even knowing their end-goal after the "factory" episodes.
There's a very different take on the "runaway AI" story, not nearly so "satisfying sex" focused so much as "satisfying values", that comes to more or less the same conclusion. "Friendship is Optimal", about a friendly AI that wants you to have friends...
Anonymousover 6 years agoI loved the story, and agree with some of the other about it a bit anti-climatic. Hopefully a 2nd chapter will resolve that... Great work though!
liz33ndover 6 years agoyour stories lead your readers imagination, and keep us thinking. good four star writing.
Anonymousover 6 years agocomment ...... same ....... as......... obedience is pleasureeeeee ! lol. cool storry
Selestriliaover 6 years agoI’d been disappointed with your work lately but certainly not this one! Incredibly hot. People may complain it’s anti-climatic, but I think it’s great as is- your writing has always been about the act of submitting to hypnotic bliss more than the actual sex and that’s just perfect.
