Girlfriend in the Zombie Apocalypse Day 05

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All round me my kin were lumbering into town and attacking anything that wasn't me.

I abruptly realised that I loved the chase as much as the feasting, it exhilarated my animal brain, the sheer excitement of it, so I left my feast in favour of fresh meat, the hot pulsing flow of fresh blood.

I spotted a small, short haired woman, wrapped in an old dressing gown, running across the market, her eyes fixed on a pile of things that I felt like I should recognise. Just behind her another woman, naked with a lot of delicious flesh was running screaming, chased by four of my kin. She slammed into the side of a caravan, banging on the door and screaming to be let in but the zombies were on her, scratching and biting at her slick and plentiful flesh. They dragged her to the floor with their weight and she screamed blue murder as she practically disappeared beneath them.

My kin were denied the kill by the other smaller and older woman, who had retrieved a pump action shotgun from beside a discarded backpack. She fired three shots into the pile of writhing, squealing flesh, killing the big naked female and then quickly turned the gun on herself and blew her own head off.

Disappointed at being cheated an opportunity to kill, I moved on.

Men ran for the boats and I lumbered after them. One of them tripped, then stumbled and fell face first. I launched myself on him along with a female zombie that had blue punk style hair, a very generous figure, half exposed in an open white blouse, a leather miniskirt, knee socks, ankle boots. I liked her.

We attacked the man together. He dragged the axe from my skull and sunk it into my back but it didn't even slow me down. I let the blue punk-haired sister have his lower half, while my teeth found their way to his meaty shoulder and I bit down and tore at the flesh while my fingers clawed at his throat. I scratched and scraped through flesh and tendon, opening his jugular vein and then bathed with pure undead joy in the hot crimson shower that burst from the wound.

I looked around, chewing on a torn off chunk of raw bicep. Blue-punk-zombie was chewing on his penis, trying to separate it from his body but she seemed to be having trouble for some reason.

I left her to it and got up, wanting more fresh blood to flow.

I saw another zombie near me. He was leaning over a struggling and crying man. Another brother was pinning the man's legs while he chewed at one exposed thigh while the other tore off the human's nose and cheek with his teeth.

The man's screams were a little jarring so I turned away and staggered over toward the huge barrier wall. I was hoping some of the men that had run that way had been trapped and were still alive.

They had been trapped but they weren't still alive and a score of zombies shared their meat. Amongst them, one female caught my eye, though for reasons I couldn't fathom.

She had black hair with red in it, though it wasn't blood. She had a robust body and she was topless and, leaning over her dinner, her huge breasts swung pendulously and a little silver trinket glinted between them.

She chewed a throat open, pulling the bitten gash wider with both hands and her face twisted into as close as a zombie can get to jubilance as the hot blood gulped upwards, oozing over her face and upper body as she pressed herself down into the hole and she writhed against her meal as she ate.

I enjoyed the spectacle, though I wanted to join in myself, I didn't. Instead I lumbered up around the side of the barrier to the wharf and looked out across the sea.

I could see, almost silhouetted against the setting sun, the small, squat, angular, shape of a boat, cutting through the waves.

And on board was a single, tiny, female figure. She was just barely visible, heading out to sea.

The End.

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RanceSamaRanceSamaabout 5 years ago
So much for Jay surfing with an immunity or becoming a sentient zombie and impregnating his girlfriend

I wish he was immune somehow, or became a sentient zombie. Or could control zombies while alive or had the resident evil treatment of getting augmented by the zombie virus somehow.

The predictability and the somehow rushed ending was a boner killer.

Great story setting with slot of potential. Just wish it was harnessed more.

The prontagonist was too smart to die like this after surviving for so long.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

He has a point, it would have been way better or at least kept him alive and ending up using the zombies to his advantage to save Emily and they could have escaped together or something, good story but didn't like the ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

You should've added a part where Emily got pregnant with his baby before he turned into a zombie. Or where he found a way to the island and they lived as human and zombie with a hybrid child.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
a little predictable of me but...

I really hoped that Jay had some kind of immunity to the virus (something to do with the numbess/tingling) and that once reanimated he would have had a little more control of himself along with some of his memories. Anyway I still enjoyed it as it was. Id hate to be on my own on an island for.the rest of my life like Emily though!! Any chance of another 5 chapter sequel??

J

zomgwowzerzzomgwowzerzover 9 years ago
Interesting and Enjoyable Read

I haven't read any stories in this kind of scenario before, so there may be better, and most likely worse.

Girlfriend in the Zombie Apocalypse was an intriguing read, with enjoyable erotic blocks of text, while also touching on more interesting in-universe content. I'm not particularly a fan of BDSM or maliciously overpowering a partner, but the way this was written was a nice, hot read at parts.

As for the non-erotic parts of the writing, the story's strongest points, in my opinion are the numerous facets that set it apart from a common "fuck me" story that happens to throw zombies in for novelty. The emotional frustration and subconscious insistence of morals are a realistic, recurring conflict, allowing the story to continue, albeit at the protagonist's expense.

Other noteworthy topics covered are the weapons used, survival gear, mental degradation and infection. These are unfortunately only touched on - had they been elaborated on further, I would have rated 5/5 (rated 4/5). The varied topics keep the read interesting but the lack of detail hurts the story slightly. I very much enjoyed the suggestive numbness the protagonist increasingly felt, as well as his "caveman-like" transformations and (what appeared to me as) hallucinations. On the other hand, had the author not commented on how the protagonist is infected in the first place, in an earlier chapter, I would not have been able to tell that that was when he was infected.

This is a very well done erotic writing, but with more detail (without overdoing it), this could be a great story - erotic or otherwise. Still unsure about how I feel about the "forced" sexual intercourse, but I'll be watching this author.

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