All Comments on 'Good Enough for the Goose...'

Well written, but it would help if you got a good editor. There were a number of places where a word was missing. This derails the effect you are trying to create.

A little rushed at the end, but all in all one of the more enjoyable stories on this site, in spite of no sex. An easy 5. 😊😊😊😊😊

The cheating wife and her boyfriend go down in flames and the wronged husband ended up with a pretty girl and a job promotion. Really, people, it just doesn’t get much better than that. Five Stars.

Love this story. It is just so good on so many levels. Brutal justice for wronged husband and cheating bastard's daughter. Double play for the game.

I wanted Bob to end up with Barb. Agree there were editing flops but never serious enough to detract. Five*****s

Okay, so I am not an English professor, don't know if the tenses changed or words were misused.

Having babbled that. This is a fantastic story. I appreciate the time/skill used to create it. I would really like more stories from you, but I completely understand why people would never publish here. Damn vultures.

I wish the Rogue would publish some more. I read and enjoyed both postings and would love to read more. He is obviously talented.

That was a good story! I like realism or stories close to reality and this story fit the bill as very plausible. I know several characters like Paul, they have two things in common..... they are full of themselves and full of shit.....

A Great story.

Great writing. Great characters.

*This* is an excellent example of how to incorporate cheating wives, infidelity, and sex in general, to add to a story, drive a plot, add some tension and revenge/motivation.

And *this* is also a great example to point to when other LW - and other erotic literature categories - horrible/crappy/stoooopid “stories” are called out as crap and the fans and/or writers of those Pieces of Poop whine in their pouty, plaintiff wails of ‘what do you want for free?!’ or ‘No one makes you read this! - yeah, like no one makes you ride in a freshly fart-filled elevator either.

Heh, back to the point; *This* is a great, great piece of work.

Thank you Rogue9.

JMSA

Wish this author had more stories published, No wimps here and a beautiful girl to help him recover! 5*s.

the worst is that it just cost the cheaters a few years of their lifes and its back to semi Normality, TK U MLJ LV NV

Dichotomy I don't believe all I know personally Love changed to hate usually cops involved when cheaters discovered sometimes jail for beating male cheater

Story not reality But I like the ones who admit their hate and plot revenge and punishment

Again the wife gets off light

Then you turned him into a sleazy Boss fucking his assistant. That ruined the entire story. UGH!

Weathermanks , get your head out of your ass. Why would you want him to reconcile with a cereal cheater? A remorseless one at that. I do wish the author would have included a confrontation with the slut.

I was believable until Kelly realized the error of her ways. That doesn't happen in my experience. Instead she would deflect the blame, probably in her mind blaming Barbara for outing her and poisoning Hogan's mind.

Just a good, well thought out flowing story. I like the idea of a forensic accountant, don't know a lot about it but I spent decades doing similar style work with security, fire alarm systems and the like. I enjoyed the hell out of the challenges, but I never got this kind of satisfaction out of it. I spent some time looking for more stories by Rogue as he stated there were more out there on other sites but didn't come up with anything unfortunately. Signed: BTW

Page 1: who’s Don?

After two excellent offerings, why has this author stopped writing for LW?? would love to see more of his work.

I always think that these stories need a meeting of the wife and the husband to hear why she did it. Still a 5 star story

He didn’t want a cheating wife and any talking should have been on her part both, before the wedding and during the marriage.

She talked to HIS FRIEND, SUPPOSEDLY FRIEND OLIVIA why not him. Who cares about a name before the marriage, we would not have this story it would have been a walk away which is what he would have done. (NO STORY)

As written, okay story I like the way it ended.

sooner or later there is all ways a slip up. in another story on here it was a photo of them several yrs after they were married . her trying to prove if done the right way couldn't be caught .L M A O

I just finished reading this story and liked it a lot this time too. Really good story, well told. 5*

detroitdave

Why have you only written 2 stories? You have a lot of talent, and hopefully the writing bug will strike you again. And again. A lot.

Well it just proves you cannot trust anyone but yourself

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Again. This is an absolutely great BTB. Don't know which was better. Seeing Kelly burned or sing Paul go down. Getting Barbara isn't a bad way to end up.

Author only wrote two stories. What a waste, he was great. This is another favorite for me.

Gave this 4 stars first time and deserved

Your mistake? With Olivia made it good

Don't worry about cuckold who finds out and takes appropriate revenge

Shows he is real man

Wouldn't trust any who tried to hide their cuckoldry after finding out

Seems they are not really willing to do the right thing

johntwheels@aol.com

VERY, VERY GOOD!!

BTB the white collar way. By the way, did Paul ever become Bubba's girlfriend in prison?

Oh how I love a “happy” ending. Made special as both cheaters were outed. Made extra special as the nice guy ended up with the intelligent, beautiful, daughter of the pompous, cheating, asshole. 5/5

A super story; to bad it had to end. It's certainly up there with my favorites. 5 stars, to bad I couldn't give it a thousand!

Your stories always get my heart pumping and this was one of your best. I despise politicians above the law and enjoyed this one

Great writing and an amazing story. I wish you were still writing.

A great story with a clever interesting plot and great main characters.

Love the ending. Beautiful Irish Red headed hottie helps!!!

Great Story, well written and a pure joy to read... Thank You 5*****I endorse all the other comments they were all right on target, AS WAS THIS BRILLIANT STORY

more of your writings please.

That Barbara and Hogan had been able to connect the slut wife to the assholes embezzling and she's also spending time in federal custody.

How dare you cheat on a cheater? 5 stars, great story!

Serves them right. I wish Robert &Barbra the best.

I Hope That Robert Enjoys being The Angry Girlfriend in Prison ..

Probably the best BtB story on this site!

He managed to:

1) Humiliate the cheating slut wife.

2) Devastate her with his fake affair.

3) Ruin her career.

4) Leave the whore heartbroken when she finally realised he'd never been unfaithful to her.

5) Shame the treacherous friend that betrayed him.

6) Destroy the sleazy boss' political aspirations.

7) Send the asshole to jail for 20 years.

8) Get a stratospheric boost to his own career as a result.

9) End up in bed with the boss' smoking hot daughter.

Fine work indeed!

I enjoyed reading your story as it was refreshingly not too “over the top”.

Please write more stories

I don’t give 5* very often but I really enjoyed this story. It was original, well written, interesting and the justice at the end was almost breathtaking.

More please.

One more time for one of the very best non violent revenge stories in LW. A *10.

"Kelly elbowed me and muttered about being rude." - She doesn't know that he knows, but she knows that the re is every reason for him to be rude, and meanwhile Paul was being rude with his innuendo.

I know I said it before, but what does being a Catholic got to do with simply LEAVING her husband, without divorcing him?

How can she defend him when she KNOWS it's true?

His wife has been having a six-month affair, she's having a "good-bye fling," and he's filing for divorce, and HE can't get any because he's still married?

I don't think it was odd that the divorce went through quickly!

Even if he DID cheat, she was still hypocritical.

I've really enjoyed both of your tales. It's sad that you've posted nothing here for over four years.

Hope you'll consider writing more.

thank You

Nice.

She got what she deserved. Part 2 please Barb and he gets married have children and live a faithful life together!

Good story. Nothing like a good methodical burn.

Very well done! 5 stars.

Could have been better with a more robust ending with more on Barbara.

Worth 5 stars everyday

I was wondering if it would get to pregnancy and DNA but it went the right way for me.

Good Job. I agree(unusually) with an 'Anon' comment from 'Anonymous 09/11/20' There needs to be a little summary, at least, of Barbara's time after the divorce. I enjoyed this story, Thank You 5*****

I just love a good burn job

Please write more, your stories are very good.

Still love this tail!

What a great story, it was interesting to find out in the restaurant when Olivia saw Barbara and Robert that Olivia confirmed that Kelly had not only just cheated with Paul but had a history of cheating. Just love how Barbara and Robert nailed Paul that crooked cheating bastard and sent him to jail, then helped Robert dump that cheating bitch. The best was that Robert and Barbara ended up together. The epilogue should have gone a bit farther with Robert and Barbara in the end, I believe that a chapter 2 would be not only an interesting read but would be well received.

Well written with great characters. 5 stars

It's easy to like this story...you get to follow the plot and then enjoy most of what's going down...it was great to see how every thing was thrown in the cheates face... but it was a let down in the end...his wife's cheating was the reason we have a story here...but we only get to see a little of what happened to her in the end...I don't like guessing at what she felt... this story makes more sense if we can feel what's going on with her...she had to be hurting more now than ever before... and we barely see any of it...to me...the ending was a big let down.......

One of the biggest weaknesses of 1st person POV is the inability to know what others think, or are doing when away from them, unless you switch view points back and forth. That’s okay, but you need to establish that pattern from the very start of the writing. In this case it’d occur just once at the end of the story.

Switching POV back and forth SMOOTHLY is very difficult to do well, and a big complaint of many critics here on Literotica.

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The only problem I have of this is I too would like to know some of what was thinking. Kelly would have been able to explain from her point of view, when she met him the final time, as per her request through Hogan’s lawyer to sign the papers. Then we could have found out some through her verbal explanation to Hogan. Of course, not having the God’s eye view, or her actual thoughts while she was talking, whatever she says is colored through her glasses.

Since the affair had only started 6 months ago, I would like to know when Paul had started putting the moves on Kelly. Was she being a bit mercenary, finally taking Paul up on his long time flirting, knowing that she was going to have kids soon, so the final fling. Or for some reason, only 6 months ago did Paul put the moves on her, and she just fell into his arms. Or... what?

And just a sentence or two about what she was doing out west with her aunt would have been nice, else it seems as if there were no good feelings — nothing at all — left by Hogan for Kelly. Absolute total indifference, which is kind of cold, and I find hard to believe, as they were getting ready to have kids.

I am not a literary or grammar critic. It was a great story for me and if these Hemingway's didn't like it, oh well.

Great, great story. One little typo was hilarious. I'm sure it's been mentioned. Hell, maybe I mentioned it but Barbara "straying with a friend" was funny.

I'm glad Hogan didn't meet with her for some lame excuse for the cheating. That doesn't need to happen because there is never any excuse for that. Too bad she didn't get locked up or catch AIDS.

I Liked this Story a lot .. I cannot believe the wife did not end up in jail .. I am working on 2 Stories at the same time . I hope that I will not get raked over the coals for errors .

A bit of a fantasy, though based on occasional truth. But, still very entertaining. Obviously, I still liked it enough to give it five stars.

Just re -read the story for a second time. I still enjoyed it, perhaps even more this time. However had an afterthought. I wish the story was longer, and that the players were more developed and described in much more detail. I would have like to hear, not a lengthy description, but one about Kelly and Pauls meeting and how they acted towards each other. I definitely would like much more about Barbara. And, if she a Hogan had a liaison after it all , and if so, how it went. And, bearing that in mind, I wish she would have been a bit older...say, 26, or 28. Still an extremely entertaining story.

I've read this story several time over the yeats and absolutely love it. It's perfect just the way it's written. As far as all the comments about how the Kelly character felt, what was she thinking, what were her reactions? Fuck that, she would probably just spew the same tired cliches all cheaters use. The bottom line is she never respected her husband from the beginning. She felt entitled to fuck around on him throughout their relationship. As far as the Bob character, yeah he was clueless, trusting husbands are like that until they have a reason not to be. The taking down of the smarmy Evans character with the help of the hot daughter was a bit pat but I loved it. In the end the cheaters got a big shit sammich delivered by Karma and the hero gets the hottie...but isn't that how faireytales are, they all have happy endings.🤣

Very good story with some pay back and a reward for the gander. Keep writin'

Nothing like a BTB ending to make a sad story happy.

It was a nice story until the ending. The ending messed it up as it went the way of most stories in here of the husband ending rich with the most beautiful girl in the world while the wife is left destitute. this ending is getting old.

Get tired of she cheated is caught and now is sorry.

She made decision to cheat repeatedly

How can he have any love left after such total disrespect.?!

Worry about the way you look?!

Strut. Caught and burned the cheaters.

jtwheels

GREAT

Excellent, in most of it, but the same old ending. Hard done to man ends up with the most beautiful woman and lives happily ever after

Why is everyone thinks it is the other guy that gets caught not them.

I think Paul rolled over way too easy

Good, but the restaurant part vexed me. If Olivia calls Kelly the first thing she'll say is "Hogan knows about Paul" so I dont get why Kelly is leaving 'furious' messages about his cheating when you would expect her to be making excuses and apologies about her affair. The whole story fell apart for me there.

Reasonable reactions appropriate to the characters. No ninja going postal warrior. Just honest revenge. Wish he was in charge of the Trump investigations.

EXCELLENT STORY...I LOVED IT!

Loved it. Great story.

Other than using wrong names such Don instead of Paul and the fact that Kelly went to Pittsburgh with Paul so she couldn't have driven home as she didn't have her car. So where was Paul's car, wouldn't Paul be driving Kelly home as he picked her up from Hogan's and her House on the Friday morning. You need to edit your stories more carefully!

I should point out that as a "staunch Catholic", her mother would never have referred to Derry as "Londonderry". Londonderry is an anglicized name for Derry, and a staunch Catholic would sooner eats nails than call it Londonderry. It would be equivalent to a staunch Democrat wearing a 'I love Trump' t shirt.

Great story. But it needs some serious editing.

Great! I wish there were more stories about men who will not tolerate cheating and being a cuckold. More stories like this and Thanks for letting us reader comment. When I look at a story I check and if I cannot vote or post a comment I will not read it. Once again Thank's!

I've read this a couple of times. Its good. But (there is always a 'but' lol) The end where Kelly is driving home and leaving nasty messages stikes me as odd. If she knew she was caught and left messages saying she was sorry as she drove, I get that. If he was caught while she was out of town she would leave nasty messages but not race home. You mixed the two possibilities and I thought it was unlikely and awkward. Also, Olivia called Kelly about Hogan in the restaurant but didnt mention that he knew everything? Yet Kelly didnt find out till later that she was the only cheater. Fix that and rewrite that ride home with tearful apologies and its a 10.

I loved the story... 5 STARS...What's with all the criticism of the Authors work? I don't recall reading any of their work... Easy to bitch and whine when you haven't written anything...

Very well done. It's really nice that the bad guys do it to themselves. Oh what a tangled web we weave. Good stuff.

Perfection in words....

One of the better stories I've read lately.

I'm going to finish reading the story because it's well written so far but it really killed it for me when Bob didn't barge in and confront Kelly while she was on the phone admitting she is cheating on him. It killed the story for me because, once again, an author has ignored what would happen in real life when presenting a potential real life situation in their story. Unless the story presents a credible reason for not having a real life reaction to a real life situation it really just becomes a 'B' movie.

If any husband, who truly loved his wife, heard this phone conversation they would immediately confront their wife about it. Tell me I'm wrong......

The lead up to the final scenes was really well written however, the story crashed through what would have been the most interesting parts that is the reactions from Kelly, Paul and all the others involved. Really could have done with more detail on how the revenge affected all those the revenge was taken on.

Just does not ring true. No man would react, or rather fail to react, as he did early on.

Really enjoyed this as I am from Philly and also spent quite some time in Doylestown. The story was great and didn't need sex to sell it. Maybe I'm that guy who thinks too much and plans too much but I related to not flying off the handle like so many would.

****Very Entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

oh liked that shot out to hogan hero's loved that show ty for the read

B movie ANON it wasnt a phone convo her friend was in the house with her in the ketch when he heard the convo but yeah personally i would have walked in and told her we were done pack a case and left i mean he went for a 50/50 split in the end would have been the same then barb would have seek him out anyway or done it herself

Didnt btb enough. 4

Excellent, enjoyed the read. And to any of the grammar critics, they are looking for it. Those of us who read these for enjoyment, translate and go on. Not perfect, cast ye not the first stone. Thanks for your writing spirit.

(6/1/2021)

Nice! I really enjoyed this read. I'm in 100% agreement with DUBLXL of 12 days ago, yup, translate and move on. Only one critique though, I would have enjoyed more of a build-up of Hogan's and Barbara's relationship culminating in a long sweaty erotic coupling in the end. But hey, that's me. 5 stars. Thanks, Rogue9_815, hope your still out there writing and receiving comment alerts.

Good story, could have even been longer and dirtier for cheating conspirators.

An excellent story that grabs your attention early on and doesn't let go until the end which comes too soon. Not sure how Rogue9 could make it longer and still keep the reader's attention but what was there seemed to pass too quickly. Now on to his other story. Doubt if there will be more stories but this one and I bet his first left readers wanting more from his imagination.

5 stars but I wish there was some more meat to the ending,some more comeuppance to Paul and others involved like his former friend and the lawyer lady who knew Paul was banging two other women even if she didn't know about Kelly, the meeting between Hogan and Kelly for some closure, and more romance between him and Barbara. Am however glad there was no reconciliation, sometimes I'm for forgiveness but not with Kelly after what she pulled and planned to continue to pull.