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Click hereThanks again for reading, and for your vote! ( hint, hint *laugh* )
I just saw a comment that I believe is partially accurate — you have not just an incredible imagination but I believe that you are incredibly gifted at expressing your creativity!!!
Again, I know my vote is to late! Thank you for sharing this beautiful and joyful story!!!
A little distracted at first when trying to figure out the cast of characters, but one I got into the story I enjoyed it. Liked the slinky part when talking about the old busy body. Good story, just sorry that my vote way too late to help with the contest.
And I'm no literary genius, but the ending felt kind of rushed, and almost just stapled on as the end. But again that's just me. Good read though, 10/10 nut.
My first comment after reading lots of stories here - gripping, not just great sex but a really well developed story. Thanks for your imagination!
all of your continued stories so far, & as a Native Shaman, I don't think that any of my Wiccan friends would object to any of your stories. I am half Cherokee and a Shaman of the Cherokee. I have easily given you a 5 on every one of them, and wished that it could be more.
Blessings to You & Yours...
This story is well written and complete just as it is, but is also one in a series that are all linked together. It takes skill to do what you have accomplished. Thanks for the story(ies)
So this is the first time I've ever read a book of such description written by an unpublished individual and I believe I could not have been indoctrinated any better - it was awesome.