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komrad1156
komrad1156
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"Forgive you? Of course I forgive you." She leaned down closer to him and said, "I don't know what our time together meant to you, Pete, but it meant something very special to me no matter what your exact mental state may have been."

"I honestly don't remember too much of it, Holly, but I do remember you...us...together and...well...I remember having feelings for you—or at least the person I thought you were. It's just all so confusing and muddled. But now you're free and you can get back to your life and find someone closer to your own age to love." Coleman blinked away a tear and said, "I'm already jealous of him, you know."

He raised his hand hoping she might take it. He wanted to feel her touch one last time.

She took his hand and moved closer to him. "You really have no idea what you mean to me, do you, Pete Coleman?"

He didn't speak. He just squeezed her hand. "I know the man I was being held with...not by...wasn't himself. But I saw enough of that man to know I...fell in love with him." She leaned down very close to his face and said, "Pete? I know you need time to get better but I want you to know that if you'll let me, I'll be by side every step of the way. And when you're recovered, well, I know it's not normally the girl's place to ask, but I was wondering if, well, when you do feel better if you might like to go out with me? You know, on a real date without any doors with locks on them." She smiled that smile he so vividly recalled.

Coleman smiled back and said, "I'd like that very much. But what guy my age wouldn't enjoy being seen in public with such a beautiful young woman like you? The real question is 'are you sure a beautiful young girl like yourself wants to be seen with a man my age in public'? I mean, we could go back to the safe house I had built and I could make dinner for us."

Holly laughed. "I'll pass on the location, but I'd be proud to be seen in public with you. The bigger question is do you want to be seen in public with the most famous—or perhaps infamous—teacher in the state?"

Coleman pulled her close and said, "Nothing would make me happier."

Holly smiled and said, "Nothing?"

He raised up and kissed her and said, "Well, there may be something..."

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oldpantythiefoldpantythiefabout 1 year ago

Took me a while to wrap my head around this story, not sure if I like it or not. Very confusing, the good guy is the bad guy but yet is still the good guy. I can see why this story has a lower rating than other stories by this author. I think I like and enjoy his other stories much more.

Rancher46Rancher46almost 3 years ago

This story, yes was very different from the authors other mature stories, but different in a good way while entertaining. The ending of the story needed more closure between Holly and Pete. It would be nice if the author came back and wrapped up this story with a conclusion or an epilogue at least. 5 stars

ironmoose007ironmoose007about 4 years ago
Needs more..

Need an addition to the story filling out more of the after story... But good story anyhow.

HragsHragsover 4 years ago
A bit unusual !!!

O k, Much different than the other stories he has written. Kind of strange but at the end, guess I see the point,lol.

auwingerauwingerover 6 years ago
Wow!

I thought I'd chosen the wrong author at first! What a twisted web! Another great job, Konrad! 5*

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