All Comments on 'Her Itch'

Another of your stories where a cheating bitch of a slut wife walks all over her loving but slow dumb husband and gets away with it!! She has shown him nothing but disrespect from almost the start of their marriage and while she appears “nice to him” it is just a cover so that her son can have a good respectable father figure. In the mean time love or not he has no business sitting at home while she is out slutting around. Then what about the cost of maintaining an apartment and paying her bull’s expenses? Where did the money for that come from? Seems like it was nothing but win-win for her and zero for him. Now she gets to set a wonderful example for the kids.

Once again proof that an open marriage NEVER works! There is just too much to lose. The partners never reach a point where they are comfortable with how they go about with their other partners – because cheating with permission is still cheating. This is a very good and believable story. She had a hall pass that she used and thought it will last forever. I like it how the partner that usually finds out the spouse will not play anymore always says it’s the partners ego that came in the way! BULLSHIT! No man or woman worth their salt are built like this for when one gets married the place where you promise to forsake all other become even MORE important especially when you suddenly dropped into a open marriage; or where she reminds him that they have an open marriage – When he gets home one night she’s dressed to the Nines and tells him, “I have a date but not with my husband!” Someone in the comments called him a milquetoast husband. I. Don’t see him as one. Towards the end he decides to get his manhood back! He fucks-UP her 6’ 5” well built Body building Lover good and solid so that her paramour lands in hospital. That is the time where ALL men applaud the protagonist – whether you like BTB or not! Justice MUST BE SERVED with vehemence! Because he is not happy about this for they were happy until she jumped this on him and he had no recourse because he was totally unprepared for HOW she got him to agree. The very first time she pulls this shit on him shows you how sneaky she is and later she confirms this when admits and tells him how she has put UP her lovers in a flat that she pays for and also how she supports these lovers. These KEPT lovers! Not only sneaky but a BITCH of BITCHES on this website! I enjoyed the story! Well written!

And by the way Shantel was a selfish bitch, she deserved more punishment for her actions. A shame she got away with it. I marked u down because of the ending

Sad story

This is so distasteful!

Milquetoast husband, cheating wife... same old, same old

At least try something new, this is just a retread of other stories

I don't like BTB, but in your stories the wife never loses, NEVER

Occasionally doesn't mean maintaining an apartment and keeping stud /bull on full time basis.

Kick to curb and if children prefer slut time to cut their Strings.

What kind of spouses are they going to be.

B up Sam was absolutely uncalled for. He was aware that Sweetie and Hubby had an open marriage. iHe was NOT aware that the frequent nooners had not been ‘cleared’ with Hubby! No disrespect, if anything, envy of a man who was his superior in Sweetie’s heart, contribution to society, etc. Petty!

The whole situation was unbalanced. While she had lovers on the side, he didn't have any exept this one time. I disagree with Wakeupnow, open marriage and wife sharing can work, but only if it's for both parties.

If it had only beem occasional sex on the side for the wife it could have worked in this situation, but the wife spent family money on an apartment and the living for her lovers without the knowledge of the husband. And she had daily sex with the lover. That all together is inexcusable - in my opinion.

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As always the major problem is the lack of comunication from both partys, the husband was incapable of transmitting to the wife how her liason affected him, and she couldnt properly hear or deliver her argument. They never heard each other trully.

Even after being separated for over a year, he still bends over and takes it up the rear from her.

And they did for Rob. He was no longer in a marriage situation he desired. Based on a previous agreement with Shantel prior to getting married, either could leave at anytime .

That's what he did. For Rob, The whole opened marriage thing fizzled out. Love was not enough. (It never is.)

Swinging does not work. Open marriages do not work. Period. If your spouse or significant other says they do start the divorce proceedings or break up. Allowing this bizarre behavior is caustic to a relationship.

Shantel has 5-7 UNACKNOWLEDGED sexual encounters a week with her bull, plus bi-weekly dates. A ratio of (11-to-15) with the bull to (6-to-13) with the husband [72% Seconds, sloppy or not] tells me that the husband is NOT her primary partner.

Did she tell the daughter the numbers??

Grimjack01 is right.

Olfrog14x

I know a lady. She married an outdoorsy guy who liked to fish from time to time. They had kids, owned a house and lived a good married life. Except, as the years went by, the husband began fishing more. Every Saturday. Then every Sunday as well. Then he began leaving Friday evening for the lake, and wouldn't come home until Sunday. No cheating, just fishing. He evetually bought a boat, then a bigger boat, then a better boat. By the end of their marriage he was taking his vacation to compete in fishing tournaments. His wife became sick of his self-centered disrespect of her and their marriage, and to nobody's surprise, other than his, she divorced him.

This story follows the same pattern, with adultery taking the place of fishing. The husband loved his wife and their marriage. Shantel was the perfect wife, except for . . . her "itch." Like the wife mentioned above, he accepted that flaw in exchange for all of her other obvious excellent qualities. Now, I wouldn't make that choice. You might not either, but the main character did. The rest of the story develops logically from that decision. The divorce happened in response to Shantel's escalation, not the adultery.

With all that in mind, the story worked.

The main thing to like about this story is your portrayal of Sam, the essential big black bull. Values only for his bbc, he has absolutely nothing else to offer. Uneducated, unable to hold a decent job, dependent on the cheating wife for his.support. Even the whore does not respect him. Perfectly described. The only other small pleasure was the husband finally growing one ball and giving Becky and Shantel a figurative cuck you. The ending made no sense at all. I am a fan, but only a *3 this time and that is for accurately portraying the black bull made balless bull with a ball bat.

They had an open marriage, that's understood but the facts were she saw her bulls almost every day. That's what broke it up.

Sorry, but that's all I can give on this one. I usually enjoy your writing. This one I cannot get my head around. I have trouble believing how a man, no matter how much he loves a woman would allow her to disrespect him in this manner.

He must have been thinking with his little head when he married her. He knew what she was, she told him, and he should have concluded that in the long run it would be an untenable position. Hey, a slut is a slut.

I like this story but it feels unfinished.

I would really like to know whether the kids came around to his way of thinking and whether the wife was wiling to make amends and behave

I agree with rfnks2002, that ending sucked. "I got a new job. It was like the old job. I don't date. I'm still married to a slut. My kids hate me. We're going to counselling. The end." I feel as though I wasted my time reading this.

What was the point of it? They got married because of a plot dev-... um, I mean because their kids were grump-... er, because they loved one another. Yeah. She's a slut and he's a cuck yet he's surprised when he finds out she's fucking her big dicked boyfriend more than she admits she is. He stays with her because she treats him nice and people think he should be grateful. His kids grow up knowing she's a slut and he's surprised when they turn on him because they think he's a hypocrite. This MC is a complete moron. Waste of a story.

the ending sucked . Add another chapter or two ,

His willingness to be a cuckold cost him respect in his carreer. He should never have agreed to something he could never accept. Her version of devotion is not love. It is control.

Well written. Three stars.

He was stupid for marrying her. So his problems were his own doing. The I can't be faithful and 1% of the time discussion was the place to take the off ramp. Mail the child support, let your son come around any time he wants but have nothing to do with that woman.

Wasted decade taking damage and another 5 years repairing it.

And hubby was and is a PUSSY. I have read everything you have on literotica, and still think that THE BRIDGE is far and away your best. It was DAMN GOOD.

Not my cup of tea. Can't imagine such a relationship.

the original boundaries of marriage, and redraw them yourselves, there is NO way of making sure they are fair and appropriate to both parties.

One of the rules requires 'exclusivity' on the part of her partners. But yet she is only getting 1% of her sex from the Bull? What Bull would commit to exclusivity for 1 f*ck every 3-4 months? Later we find that the 1% figure is a lie.

To ensure cleanliness, a rule requires some degree of affection for the outside sex partner. How does that make sense? Aren't we usually told "it's just great sex, not love"?

And the whole 'respect' thing has been discussed thoroughly.

So shocking that the rewritten rules of the marriage need to be rewritten again. This time by him. Then he can spend the next 15 years over compensating her for the promiscuity he has granted himself before it becomes her turn again.

4 pages to get to an extremely unsatisfactory ending.

Wittol definition is - a man who knows of his wife's infidelity and puts up with it.

"When his wife told him she had just made love to his best friend, her husband, being a wittol, wished her happiness, and his wife displayed appropriate affectionate contempt for her husband."

Restaurant scene at the end —

"Let me say again how sorry I am, the way things worked out," she said.

"Not your fault. What happened ... happened,"

But t was her fault. Instead of the occasional extracurricular date, she had an apartment and had a fuck almost daily — for years. HUGE lie. That was most of, though not all, the crux of the split.

Nobody wins but everyone looses (especially Doug), except Becky.

RG I think you needed Rob to let Shantel know he was aware she was seeing her Bull everyday! She was spending more time with her Bull than him!

Enjoyable story. Strange but interesting.

As many times that I have read this, my opinions really haven't changed.

They agreed to a pseudo-open marriage so that she could scratch the occasional "itch." Instead, she was housing and supporting bulls, the latest one that she was fucking six or seven times a week that she wasn't telling her husband about, despite her pledge of honesty.

Samuel's visit was 100% to rub his nose in it. Sam had ZERO to demand such a visit. All she had to do was say, "Do you like your apartment?" and he would drop it.

One thing that he never threw in Chantel's face was Sam's other "clients." So much for his clean bill of health!

Chantel won't admit it, but as Becky said, he was her cuckold, and a wife may love her cuckold in a way similar to the love she might have for a pet dog, but there can't be any respect. Just the way she acted whenever he tried to stand up to her, regardless of how right or wrong he might have been, showed a total lack of respect for him.

At the conclusion of this story you give Rob a set of balls but decide to make it a small set. You can never seem to let a husband break away with any dignity and even here he's alone after a year and agrees to family counseling proposed by his cheating wife. Why can't you ever write about a husband that makes a clean successful break from a dominate cheating woman? Great writing skills but your endings almost are the same with the weak man slinking away. 1*

This started as her needing to scratch an itch on occasion. So he agreed to open marriage for sake of kids. One of the rules was honesty. She introduces her BULL to him. This now crosses the line to cockhold relationship. It was never really explained why he wanted to meet husband, but bull is crossing the line from open marriage. Then we find out about apartment and her fucking her bull every day! What happened to honesty and respect. At this point scratching an itch was a lie. The apartment was lie by omission. Fucking her bull everyday is a lie about open marriage because there is now a cockhold relationship. She does not appear to have regretted her decisions, she changed the rules and the deal. and in fact is looking for new bull, but, “no one will come near me” so she is looking. I understand she took care of him but what about honesty and respect, and talking to his boss..... really where is the respect and honesty from her.

I enjoyed the story, it wasn;t a usual Cuck-wimp story , smacks of :Ohio's "what did I do that was wrong?"

Shantel's logical approach to having outside sex makes sense and her treating him like a "king" was also understandable.

good take

... because you don’t pull punches in dealing with jealousy and doubt caused by a faithless wife. Keep pissing me off and thanks for that.

The first two thirds of the story were kind of disgusting to me. I cannot imagine how a man could allow a woman, his wife, to treat him that way. But towards the end, when “Rob” finally grew a backbone and stood up to the abuse, the story got a lot more interesting. I wish the ending hadn’t been so vague, but overall, it was a pretty good story.

She can fuck who she wants and never tried to control her so called itch or seek help. Put up a stud to fuck her and still say she loves her husband. This wasn’t a open marriage but it work for one person only. Pretty sick relationship .

That has embedded a BTB.

Can't see it? Start at the end... Shantel is not getting any... why? Two parts - one, she is saddled with the shadow of the protagonist, who is clearly capable of violence. Further, she is not nearly as wealthy as she was - floating a lover is not possible on a real estate agents' salary, and she has three kids and serious expenses... who would want to pick up that baggage?...

Which makes clear what she really was, during her marriage, to her lovers - she was a patsy. Now, she has a difficult time supporting her son by another man, and is trying to get something like child support, I guess. Puts her airs, her attempts to think of herself as some kind of queen, in question, n'est ce pas?

Further - she is under a threat of violence - why did he beat Sam? "A message to someone else you might say. A strong hint that they should keep their word"... rather suggests that "taking him to the cleaners" ain't in the cards...

Becky has been damaged in her work - she was lead when the protagonist tore down the lab at the pharmacy company - it was her job to keep such things from happening. The final jab only shows she was 1. damaged and 2. responsible for the problem. This kind of thing is not tolerated in high level operations.

All rather more plausible that most BTB stories.

And still the mice, they rage.

YMMV

Green-something

Same old, same old.

Semi cuck silliness by Richard

Family counseling? With his ungrateful little shits and his estranged whore?

Fuck rating this story higher than a one - I'd erase every fucking trace of this from the face of the earth if I had the power to do so!

RichardGerald

If I may, a few observations regarding your tale. From the outset, it was clear to me and I suspect many other readers that the major male character was going to be saddled with the short end of the stick in the power relationship between Shantel and himself. From your scripting you made it obvious that she saw herself as the domme in this bizarre relationship. That being the case you painted yourself into a creative corner with respect to Robert. The role of cuckold was the only real outcome in spite of the pivotal role he played within the family unit. Sadly as events played out he was left facing one of two options; either as a willing doormat of a cuckold, or as a male who chose to opt out of their strange arrangement, keeping his self respect and gonads intact. The characterizations of Shantel and Becky did not facilitate any sympathy to this reader, but both came across as shallow, self-centered bitches. Robert as a character redeemed himself only towards the end of the tale; I suspect the reason why so many commentators responded so negatively towards the manipulated cuckold was that any true man should have pulled the plug much earlier in the relationship. Additionally, the ending to this story was one of the weakest amongst all your other stories which I have enjoyed. It fizzled out and did not give the feeling of definitive resolution for Robert or his strange brood.

It hurts.

Translation- don't bother reading this trash cuckold shit.

"His wife did exactly what she always said she was going to do... constantly fuck other guys." -

Not true! She said that she would have an OCCASIONAL "itch" that she would need to scratch, NOT that she would have a series of lovers that she would be supporting out of money that could be going to the family budget, and fucking on a nearly daily basis!

What type of man would live under those condition come from? / life's to short to live like that you created a monster ( the female libido) thriving off her self derived satisfaction/ women do give threw sex there is no way she could possible respect her husband or any man for that matter ( I would call her a sociopath ) isn't that where supposed smartness comes from/ the inflated libido imagery...Pretty sick story and I have been on this earth long time...( she

's the kind of women that stakes are driven into there hearts/ too make sure there dead ) or burned at the stake...Bull's holly shit where the hell did that come from,,...

Great story! Actually it was easy to relate emotionally to all the characters. I guess I was a little lost when this boyfriend had to be beaten and put in the hospital?

Everything was ok til she brought the bull around the son. Then emasculated him about size. Tied to bed with stick of tnt between the legs and a real long fuse! BIG dick would be permently missing without a trace. Good thing I don't speak my mind, lol.

This author is just trolling for a reactive audience. I see most of you have taken the bait.

She told him she was a whore who couldn't keep her legs closed.

They got married and she behaved like a whore who couldn't keep her legs closed.

I had no sympathy for the guy. His wife did exactly what she always said she was going to do... constantly fuck other guys.

So his rebellion at the end just seemed like a toddler throwing a temper tantrum. He agreed to be a gimpy cuckold and that's exactly the way he was treated... what a moron.

"open marriages are a thing and he went into something he could not handle" - Two things: First, it was an open marriage only in theory, since he had no desire to sleep with another woman. As I said in another comment, it's like a wife who doesn't like that her husband bets on the horses. He says, "You can do it, too," but since she doesn't want to, what does that permission mean? Second, he went into the "open" marriage believing that she would only have to scratch the occasional "itch," NOT that she would be having a string of long-term affairs, maybe paid for my her money, but that was money that could have been going to the family.

"Author conveniently said she was seeing sam daily just to justify rob walking away" - No, the author didn't "conveniently" say that, that is what was happening, and thus a violation of their agreement. She did NOT do "exactly" as she said! She SAID that she would need to scratch and "occasional" itch, not fuck her bulls on pretty much a daily basis.

Sam wasn't looking for Rob's consent, he was a bull checking out his lover's cuck! As I've said elsewhere, she didn't HAVE to agree to bring Sam around. She's essentially supporting Sam, giving him a home and an allowance. If Sam didn't like that she would allow him to do that, he could always just walk away.

should have walked away before the marriage. Character was a dumb ass.

cause seriously i thought it was going in one direction and it went other.

i enjoyed the story buildup. up until conflict. i did not like conflict resolution. it went other way than expected. open marriages are a thing and he went into something he could not handle. she is everything a person wants in an open marriage. thats what she agreed to offer and thats what he signed up for. she made one mistake of introducing sam . everyone does small mistakes in marriage. he is the one with problem. he never accepted their marriage is open . instead he pretended nothing is happening. eventually in an open marriage you are bound to run into her lover. thats what happend. and thats the thing you should brace yourself in an open marriange.

Author conveniently said she was seeing sam daily just to justify rob walking away. instead he should have fucked becky occasionally to feel good about himself and made their marriage truly open. i am not saying that would be ideal ending but this ending does not make any sense. what is the point of this story. she did exactly what she said she will do at the begining of the story. it is heavily flawed. it portrays rob as victim getting his revenge but true victim is sam. sam actually wanted husbands consent to fuck his wife. that shows his respect for rob. man that is the peaks of an open marriage.

And that shit with kids it is depressing by the end. the author has a lot of violence in him. no offence. just an observation and not a negative one either.

He got his balls back, that's what happened.

While ostensibly an "open marriage," it is perfectly obvious that Rob went into the marriage expecting that Shantel would OCCASIONALLY need to scratch an "itch," NOT carry on a series of long-term affairs,,including paying for the upkeep of her bulls!

Which also puts the lie to her claims that she had "no choice" but to bring Sam around. SAM is the one with no choice! If insists on meeting her husband, she drops him, She has all the power in that relationship. For all her professions of love, she WANTED to rub her bull in his face.

I'm glad RG didn't continue this. Based on prior history Rob would be soon sleeping in the guest room while Shantel fucked her bulls in the master bedroom.

As has been said, her "itch" was just an excuse to have her affairs, since it seems to have been miraculously cured!

... when the narrative stops. Would I like to know more? Sure. Has this story come to a logical end. Yep. It's the story of a man growing into himself, questioning his own situation and acting on it. It's a clear 5.

No ending. 2*

I know: You had this idea and had to run with it. But you had to create two cartoon characters and it got harder and harder to suspend all logic.

Interesting premise, still. You're normally a good writer, so it would be interesting to see you revisit this with actual humans that normal people might relate to.

"Nothing you said here makes you any less a cuckold," - The truth comes out.

Sir, I have a beef with authors who wind up a good tale...spending 90% of the time twisting the reader up in a twit...and then dumping out on us in the last 10%. Poor

And on second thought it was a pretty long tale...of subtle/partly hidden/cuckoldry that was awfully hard to believe....get into...even if it is fiction.

You are darned good and I'm glad you kept on writing.

Your writing held its usual excellence. Its your story. Didn't like the ending not life as I know it

I have trouble finding it. Why?

Because it has similar themes, tones and references as that of Javmor and Jezzaz. Both of them are, in my mind, also incredible writers who *occasionally* have stories or characters whom I also despise.

But generally, I love them to pieces.

So just to find this morally complex drama, I had to add it to favorites. Take that as you will.

Please write a second chapter to the story!

Richard/Gerald

I enjoyed your tale ...all except the last page. It seemed to me that you had decided to give up on developing a conclusive finish. For me that left a certain amount of dissatisfaction. Your other tales have generally intrigued me in that they are developed using plot lines and characters that are not exactly stereotypical of most of the LW contributions. I wasn't expecting a "happily ever after" end as this is a distorted view of what tends to happen in real-life situations. I would have liked to know just how effective that "family counselling" approach went. But for God's sake please keep contributing!

Open endings are not really my thing. The subject itself was not my cup of tea. To be honest open marriages are divorces that still didn't happen as you story shows.

He was an idiot to go into this agreement when he was obviously a monogamous kind of guy.

Well, it was interesting. The reasoning for the start of the issue is a little surprising. He had agreed to certain things, things he couldn't do and he knew it. So he was using her, and she was doing what was right for her. He was wrong to himself and her for doing that. And doubly wrong for not dating for himself, which I mention later.

And the backstory for what he did to his workplace was a discussion...confrontation with Becky. And...why Becky? Maybe thats the point. It happened in a paragraph instead of being part of the story. Although if I recall, at least it wasn't pure narrative.

Well, he probably could have gotten her to be faithful by accepting things, and dating for himself, and suddenly what she can't have would appear so attractive. That, or helping her to release her inner pain slut sub. It was there, I could see it, although no direct hints were given. Or at least end up in a relationship of the type he liked better when it was obvious she wouldn't do what he wanted by pulling back. It affected her here, so it may have been successful.

The reasoning for not getting a divorce is a bit self spiteful since he can't move on and she feels bound to a promise. So, what the hell really. Just because he thinks it's over doesn't mean there aren't loose ends he has to tie up. I disagree with that part of the story.

He hurt Sam for an example to show what he can do? That's too bad he showed what was probably attractive to her only at the end. That's misplaced. He should have dated to effect the same thing. So I disagree with beating someone up.

Shantel seemed to come out with integrity that rivaled that of "I," which...was weird. Well, it was interesting to see something different play out. Although different doesn't mean good. But it was good, even if I disagree with the plot.

..."I cried that first night like a baby" ... if that protagonist is a little of your own personality then all is explained: The apple never falls far from the tree!!! Once a cuck/wimp always one!!!

Kudos to Alana for proposing a true open marriage. The problem is, HE doesn't want anyone else, so his "freedom" to fuck other women is meaningless.

I'm sorry, I like a blow job as much as the next guy, and I know he agreed to this "arrangement," but I wouldn't want the lips that had probably been wrapped around another guy's cock the night before on mine.

LOL, her lovers have to "prove" that they're exclusive? Just how do they do that? Just she really think that these "Bulls," these studs, are just sitting around, waiting for her to get her "itch"?

He said that Samuel offered his hand, but did he take it?

At La Perla she broke the same rule she accused him of breaking at the Christmas party! She was even worse, he didn't refuse to dance with her at the party.

"Sam now accepts that you understand and accept my being with him." - Actually, he DOESN'T "understand and accept" it. He TOLERATES it!

For an intelligent woman, she was awfully stupid. She KNEW that he was already upset at her throwing her bull in his face, to her answer is to FURTHER humiliate him?

"You agreed to my stipulations" - Which she has now violated, INCLUDING his right to walk away.

I know I've said this before, but she has had bulls, plural. Women who have bulls, have cuckolds for husbands. Ergo, he is a cuckold.

"Is Shantel there let me speak to her?" - What, she wants to speak to he Mommy?

Why is he paying Eddy's tuition? Doesn't she make big bucks?

I would have preferred a more definitive ending. Either a divorce, or maybe she has a "Come to Jesus" moment, where she decides that being with the man she loves is more important than "scratching an itch"!

It feels unfinished. What happens next? Does his relationship with his daughter improve, does he get back with his wife

You have a penchant for wither weak willed men or just plain wimpy men. I feel the need to ask if you're related to Matt Moreau? Why would he not throw her under the bus? If he's willing to risk prison for beating Sam, why wouldn't he, at the very least, tell his children what Shantel had done? Why would the older kids chose her over him? Given the circumstances, why would he pay the tuition? Why would he just walk out on his Company and not try to destroy Becky? Too many unexplained actions and you just had him walk out. With his tail between his legs. Once again, you can definitely write. But constantly leaving you lead male characters stuck in the swamp gets old.

This strange story left me questioning so many things. The church visit was really bizarre. The wife and the company slut meeting up to discuss the cuckold was unexpected and made me feel that some unrevealed plot had been in the works. Her changing from cheating several times a year to daily, and quite often, twice daily, was left quite unexplained ...... and then in the end, did she say that she had not continued having sex with others? The problems with the grown children were somewhat non-essential to anything. The business of the long-term apartment was "over-the-top" and should have brought this marriage to a complete end right at the moment she confessed it. I'm "iffy" with two stars, but understand the effort to create such a long and involved story.

I don't know what it is about this story, but I personally think it is one of your best. The emotions of the protagonist and the way he tries to deal with the problem intellectually hits me.

I like the idea of a scholar coming to grips with his feelings and dealing with an emotional problem irrationally. Seems just right to me some how.

In some ways you get the mixed emotions of love and hate just about right.

I've read all your contributions here; I like them all. They're well thought out, detailed, characters are at least credible if not strong and they deal with how the heart and head struggle with life's ups and downs. I love a few of them and have read four of them repeatedly. This particular one is hard for me to empathize with your protagonist for most of it - can't seem to connect to the one-sided open marriage for all those years. But I liked it a lot.

Thanks for sharing.

I got a better idea. How about you fuck off to Romance Genre where Cognitive Dissonance quotient is so much lower. Newsflash cretin. Toothless imperatives go both ways.

This site is called literotica. People come here to get off, not to read this boring nonsense. Post your mildly-entertaining fiction somewhere else.

Never write again, you cunt

OPEN NORMALLY MEANS BOTH PARTNERS , BIG MAN , LITTLE BALLS, OTHERWISE WELL WRITTEN , LIKE YOUR STORIES, JUST SEEMS THE GIRLIES ALWAYS GET THE BEST DEAL, STILL PRETTY NEAR 5 STARS CONSIDERING WHAT SITE WERE ON. STILL KEEP READING..

That author is a real cuckold/wimp!!! The apple never falls far from the tree!!!

BORING !

First... my sincere apologies for the initial comment I left regarding this story - 'was just re-reading it, and thought out loud "Was I drunk when I wrote this?" I mean, the spirit of what I wanted to see is there, it's just that, the grammatical mistake... yikes. My writing was as pathetic as this Fitzmaurice marriage!

Secondly... please, Gerald - please don't write a follow-up to "Her Itch." Nothing good can come out of it, except a whole lot of people, pissed off (and probably rightfully so) at seeing Rob taking back Shantel's whoring ass. Sure, the open ending is troublesome, but not more than watching a man once again trying to ignore his core principales, simply because he's in love with the wrong woman. A sequel would only be acceptable if Rob ends up with someone else... but, given his two serious relationships, even that's highly doubtful!

No, let it be. Leaving the Fitzmaurices in narrative limbo, as they are now, is quite alright with me.

Come on honestly, can anyone tell me on what planet would any one put up with a black whore doing this crap? Just not believable, I am sure some blokes get off on this Shit, obviously the author does but I for one don't ⭐️

It's been a while since I read this, so I apologize if there are dupes!

"We set up rules, the first of which is honesty and the second respect," - Looks like she broke the very first two rules!

"I simply did not want anyone other than Shantel." - That's the problem with THIS "open marriage," Open marriages need BOTH partners to want/need outside lovers. If one partner, as here, doesn't want to "play," it becomes a de facto cuckold relationship, and as we see, Shantel does indeed turn it into a REAL cuckold relationship.

"Sweets are fine, but a woman like yours periodically needs a little beefcake too," - I got the impression that he was pretty beefy himself!

She didn't throw it in his face? "Sorry but I have a date and it's not with my husband," "Rob, I will be late. I'm seeing someone tonight. Can you pick up the baby from daycare and the kids from school? I wouldn't ask, but I'm leaving right from work to meet him,"

"Any doubt that the intent was to put me in the frame with Sam was dispelled." - What happened to "not throwing it in his face?"

"I had no choice but to introduce him to you." - Of COURSE, she had a choice! Tell him fucking NO! She's paying for his goddamn apartment, if he doesn't like her rules he can leave.

I have to answer one of my own questions: I had asked how long she had that apartment, then saw it was TEN years - they've only been married for twelve!

"No one will come near me" - Funny, for as much as she "loved" Doug, she couldn't get along without her lovers, yet she seems to be doing just fine now without ANYONE!

I still feel that the ending is incomplete. MAYBE there could even be a reconciliation, now that she knows that she misses Doug more than the sex, that having Doug is worth more than "scratching her itch!"

pathetic cuck shit.

There is a ton of cheating / revenge stories. Thus, its quite an achievement to find a convincing new scenario. More so as it is well written and the main cast is well elaborated with their intentions, emotions, denial, delusions and actions. Like in real life there are complex interactions and unintended consequences. The strength of the story is in depicting the gradual erosion of trust, despite most characters have good intentions or are open about them to relevant persons. Its difficult to live with hard choices - or compromises. Or rebalance once misjudgments are identified.

To the doubters: Do the litmus test for the plot: try to change something - imagine an alternate plot line - assess whether it becomes more / less convincing.

Why would they become distant to their father? Why would the daughter know about their open marriage. Shantel seems like a real piece of work. Don't really like the open ending.

In all your stories the wife crosses the marital boundaries and it's always the husband who must own up to his bruised ego and hurt pride. Do women like this really exist. 'Oh this is just a physical itch I need to scratch - I love my husband and want to grow old with him'. Fuck that, kick their cheating asses out and move away taking the kids.

Second time i read this story today, and I realize how long Shan lied to and abused her husband. She had a one sided open marriage, and was using his boss to control his work life as well. Since he was boiled so slowly, I see no way he would have made such a significant change. And after he did change, all of a sudden Shan reappears getting him to go to councilling for the marriage . This is too much fantasy, for the main character to swing back and forth so easily, without really ever getting a upper hand. His wife was still not under control, and the ending implied his returning to her.

wimpy cuck shit.

Shantel, I appreciate your honesty about the reason you don't want to marry. My child will miss you and I will miss your child but all that will pass. My best wishes for a happy life. Adios.

What is it with you God damned Cucks!? Literotica is literally infested with you degenerates!

even though i can't relate to either of the main characters. Very well written. Thanks for sharing/

there was lots of betrayal here that was glossed over, like how often she met her bull and despite her opinion she was just jealous of him fucking becky, she knew he was a faithfull type and felt safe she could have her cake and eat it.

i think you tried to portray a strong self assured woman, unfortunately a skanky big black cock slut with a queen of spades tattooed on her probably by now diseased cunt is what we see.

interesting stories though 5*

The man you described would not put up with an open marriage he hated never mind the cuckold abuse.

Your ending almost universally suck. I'm sure you must have heard it before.

It's like half the story is in the last paragraph unrelated to the build up of the rest of the story.

It's like you got tired at the end and copy pasted some words out of a soap script.

Nobody would have sex with her because they were scared ? Really?

I hated it. A true piece of well written shit.WHy on Earth would you write such a garbage about a wimp who think he grew a pair of balls?

A great big green wienie. If she had left him alone after his one affair, and allowed him to keep on, they might have got by. But hell no. She wants her cake, and eat it too. But fuck him. He can not have an affair for any reason. She thinks she is so good that he should not have an excuse, even if for revenge, or to make himself fell better. Basically, she is a whore, except she is paying, not being paid. I guess that makes her a John. Or maybe a Joan?

Go play on an expressway!

I have never ever advocated or endorsed this kind of marriage/relationship. He knew what the deal was when he signed on. They laid ground rules and she broke them, plain and simple. Are they not teaching reading comprehension in school nowadays?

She put it all out there in the beginning. He agreed so what happen with him. Ok, he did the Becky thing and she got pissed. To me it proved she really loved him. She made a mistake with introducing the bull. That was like him with Becky. So all and all they were madly in love. IMO an open marriage would never work long term without jealousy. With men its size and with women is the loving their man is given the other women.

This story sucks althugh I do like your writing. No likeable characters here. I'm so not a cuckold fan either, even to one who rebels & injures the bull. Additionally in a positive sense, even with your influence from Vickie Tern, you don't have your dominating & manipulating female characters feminizing their husbands as she does in her stories, then pursue men together. Thank Goddess for that, lol!! Please, keep writing.

Great read!