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"I'm not crying! It's just those freakin' hormones...! I started sniffling over a terrible TV commercial this morning in the staff room. It's pathetic!"
She looks up at me and I see her eyes - red-rimmed and smiling over her exasperated expression. I lean down to gently kiss her forehead. "Poor babygirl... that must be really hard." I mean it, too. I'm suddenly very thankful for biology's absolute gender discrimination. There's no chance in hell I'd be able to handle being pregnant. I shudder at the thought.
She inhales sharply, her eyes locking with mine as I withdraw, and just like that the air between us crackles with awareness. "Thank you" she murmurs, her voice low. "Thank you for not making fun of my crazy hormones. And thank you for wanting our baby. And thank you for not hating me, even in your imagination, for considering abortion."
I swallow the lump in my dry throat. "I could never hate you, baby. I told you that. I love you."
Her smile wobbles. "I love you too." a quick sniffle, and then - "could we not talk about this any more tonight?"
I nod slowly. "Sure. We've still got some time." I lean in to kiss her, and then ask carefully: "You up for play tonight babygirl?"
Her eyes widen. "Really?"
"Only if you want to."
"I want to." she answers, softly but clearly.
I smile. "I want to, too. I've been doing some research... I think you're going to like what I've got planned for us tonight."
"Ooh, tell me, tell me!" she's squirming in her excitement, propped on one hand now on the couch, facing me. I bend my head and take her face in both my hands for a deep, thorough kiss.
"Nope. You'd have to wait and see, babygirl"
She sucks her breath, and blows it slowly, its damp heat tickling my chin.
"Yes, sir."
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoAm I crying and having an epiphany thanks to an incredibly well crafted story on an erotica site? Yes and yes. Geezus, it's a free psychotherapy for ya and you writer can't start guessing my level of gratitude. If good karma is a thing, plenty of it coming your way.
JasonRTayloralmost 8 years agoOh woman you continue to blow me away with your writing. The insights in this story are deep and personal, and reverberate in my soul.
Visualizing being outside the door while my love terminated our child ... it makes me weep openly even now typing it. The thought is so anathema to me and yet it is part of our broken world. I don't know if any scene in any story has stricken me so deeply. You've brought us - Dan and I both - through some pretty rough experiences over the last two stories... and yet I've learned a lot about myself through the journey. Learned because you brought out issues that I would not willingly face, and yet, as I've often lamented, your characters suck me in and I find myself compelled to find out "what next".
Thank you both - Annie and the Brit ;) - for sharing your time and talent, and most importantly your heart.
Jason
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI get so involved in reading the story and hurrying on to follow you, that I forget to vote, forget to comment, and most of all, forget to say thank you!
small_town_girlalmost 9 years agoAuthorhey y'all, just a heads-up that Ch. 10 of Hitting the Bottom was submitted yesterday, so I expect it to pop up on the 'new' list any day now... i'm so freakin' excited!
it's the one before last... and a good one, i promise!
if you need a refresher to remember where we've left Dan and Sandra, well, now's the time... :)
xoxo
Annie / STG
small_town_girlalmost 9 years agoAuthor@Anon 'just a though' - thank you for sharing your thoughts back with me, and such lovely thoughts they are, too! i'm flattered. indeed, this story is more than a quick and simple stroke story, and i'm glad you're enjoying that :)
i'm making great progress on chapter 10 and expect to get it out within a couple of weeks - please stay tuned...
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xoxo,
STG / Annie
