How Girls Night Changed My Life Ch. 03

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"Wait. Sorry I was just thinking about the pool party. How are you going to explain me being at the party with all your friends? No one will know who I am and we cant really tell them the truth." Holly said.

"That's true. I had not thought about that. We might have to come up with some story. People might get the wrong impression if I say I met her at the mall, ate her ass and then fucked her." I said.

"I don't think we should lead with that. We'll come up with something. Now put that dick back in me." Holly said.

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

The word is "definitely"; NOT "defiantly"! Make the correction for KrissesSakes!

Otherwise, a hilarious self-deprecating, low-brow effort in fantasizing the reality of having a 3inch dick to a delusional 10" ladykiller having women of all ages surrendering themselves in blissful submission!

Couldn't be more infantile or pathetic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story shame he can't spell or get words like definitely as opposed to defiantly correct, so many mistakes and it's too not to !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Get someone to proofread!

Your story is great but your writing is terrible! Almost unreadable. Please get someone to proofread and make corrections and they will be so much more enjoyable for your readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Come on, it's "definitely", not "defiantly".

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Grammar and spelling

Wow, what an awesome story!

However, you really need an editor.

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