- NonConsent/Reluctance
- I Love Her
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Click hereThis is my first story under penname Jett Lioncourt. I wrote a few stories under another name but I received a lot of hate. So this is me starting over. All characters in this story are above 18 years of age. I don't support or endorse non consensual sex in anyway. This is just a story. Hope you enjoy it. Love you all.
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I love her. I told my self I love her. But that does not justify what I did. But I loved her.
I lost control. I forced her. I forced my sister. But I love her.
Day 0:
She is beautiful. She is lying naked beneath me. Tears are glistening in her eyes. Do I love her?
My cock is in her pussy. She is my sister.
I turned her over and put my cock at the opening of hers ass. I push my cock in. She doesn't make a sound. She would never tell anyone. She loves me.
I fuck her harder. She starts moaning in pain. I should stop now but I didn't. But I love her.
I increase my pace as I reach my climax. I hear her groan. Why am I not stopping.
I cum I her ass.
I love my sister.
Day -1:
We grew up together.
She is two years younger than me. I am 21, she's 19. We live with our parents but they don't stay home much. So we were close.
Our parents were of out of station on some office business, so we were alone in the house.
We watched movies and played video games for some time. She went to bed early saying she had a head ache.
Day 1:
I am sitting on the couch in our living room when my sister entered.
She just said "I am going to prepare breakfast" and left the room.
I can't think of anything to say so I just sat there silently till she called me in to the kitchen. She has already set the table. We ate breakfast silently.
"Hey sis, how are you feeling?"
No reply.
"I know you hate me but i want say I'm sorry, I really am."
Am I.
I got up and went to my bedroom.
Day -1:
I turned off the TV and was walking towards the bedroom. I have to pass my sister's bedroom to get to mine. As I was crossing her door a question crept into my mind.
"Does she sleep naked?"
I doesn't matter. I told my self.
Day 1:
"I still love you bro."
She was standing at the door.
I open my mouth to say something but before I could she hugged me and started crying.
"I still love you. I don't know why. I don't care what you did to me. I love you soo much."
What can I say. What can any one say.
I destroyed her, she loved me.
Day 0:
Yes she sleeps naked.
I know because I am seeing.
It is 3 in the morning. I made up my mind. I sneaked into her room. I am going to fuck her.
Day 1:
I should have realized my mistake by then, but I had no remorse, no regret.
"Really?"
"What?"
"Do you still love me?"
"Yes I do."
That was enough for me, I pulled her into a kiss. She tried to pull away for a moment but then gave in.
We kissed and kissed, lost in each other's embraces.
Day 0:
I climbed silently onto her bed and started sucking her nipples. She moaned softly. My hand crept to her crotch. I started fingering her pussy.
"What the hell are you doing?"
Oh shit.
She tried to push me off her but I am too great a match for her. I grabbed her arms and pinned her to the bed.
I unzipped my pants and pulled out my cock.
"Please don't" she was pleading.
I am in no mood to hear.
I rammed my cock into her cunt and started thrusting.
"No no no no no..."
She is crying.
I love her.
Day 1:
"I want us to be normal."
"Well we can't."
"Brother, please."
"I love you."
"I know that's why I ask you to stop."
Why doesn't she understand me. I want her to be mine as my sister and as my lover.
"I want you."
"But..."
"Tell me something, do you love me?"
"Of course I do."
"Well that's enough for me."
I really is...
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoAll I can say is... I hope you were using the Tor Browser when you posted this.
Yaoi527511 months agoI love it. Don't listen to the comment section. I read MTL and other Chinese novels, so I'm big brain. They need things to be in a boring format. My only issue is that I want more of this story.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI realize it's your first story, but you could have dropped the day 0 and day 1 crap. It would have flowed better. Don't get me wrong, I liked the story, but the day shit has to go. I'd like to see more actual writing though. Maybe what happened between them, or what she did or felt while she was being raped. Give the reader more. Flesh out the story more. Take your time and add some elements to it. Throwing a bunch of words down doesn't make a story, thoughts and feelings do, so work on it some more and give us readers a part 2.
Anonymousover 4 years agoOk look bud, I'm only trying to help you with this the best I can.
1. Try to add details about the people, house or anything to give the reader a visual image.
2. If you're going to time swap between days you need to give dates instead of the shit you did.
3. Proof read so grammar, spelling or any other mistakes can be corrected.
4. And lastly have a trusted friend or family member read the story before you post it so they can give you their opinion about it and tell you what needs to be done to make it the best story it can be.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoyou can't write. the sooner you accept it the sooner you can move on to something you might have an aptitude for.
Anonymousover 5 years agoI don't understand why you are getting so many death threats, especially from a community that is usually very welcoming. This is the non-con section. Not everyone wants to read a story about a magic dick. To be honest, this had a lot of potential. I wish you would have built up your characters a little more, explained the conflict they both felt, given a reason why the brother felt compelled to do what he did beyond wondering if she slept naked. Good writing is in the details. The day 0 thing was a little confusing, I'd recommend finding a more straightforward way to time jump if that's what you're interested. Definitely find an editor and add more detail to your stories, especially the parts that are supposed to be erotic. Don't stop writing, that's the only way you get better.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoIt’s so confusing (day 0:, day 1:) and the story is so stupid. Stop writing before you end up killing your self over all this hate, (plz don’t kill urself)
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Anonymousover 7 years agoWhat is stuff doing here? This is Rape. Pure and Simple. Another reader wrote, correctly, that there is a non-consent/reluctance category and this is where this story should be. I'm not a hater, but I must say as a long time reader on Literotica that the way you've done this is just wrong. First, there is really not much of a story here - except of a boy/man who thinks he loves his sister but with implied question marks. And then gives in to his weakness, disrespects his sister, and forces himself on her. Then you post this story in the incest category rather than the one that it obviously belongs in. It doesn't really matter that this is brother and sister. That is not integral to this story. The story is that a man/boy deludes himself into thinking her loves a woman (who is barely of legal age, did he knowingly wait for her to be over 18?) and fools himself into thinking that his feelings make it ok. I, as a reader,feel betrayed that you have put this in the wrong place. Obviously so that you could gain readers in more than one category and Incest is the most popular category on Literotica.. Underhandedly, by the way. The dialogue is stilted and stiff. Her reactions are predictable and of course the sex is not erotic at all. Rape is not about sex. It is about Anger and Humiliation. Rage, Jealousy and Hate come into it. Selfishness and disregard for the feelings and choices of others are there no matter what the motivation is that is behind it. Even if this were a good story, it is poorly written. And if you don't like the comments, then disable them or try to learn from what readers want to experience. It is sneaky, in a bad way, to changer your name to avoid the opinions of your readers. Your motivations are wrong, the writing is bad, the story is in the wrong place, and your main character talks like a moron.
