I Love You Ch. 02

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And what about her? If she was throwing stones, she should throw them her own way. She had a fucked up, morbidly creepy childhood. She didn't know how to be a mother, she never really had one, and the one that she had was anything but motherly.

They would destroy this child if she decided to have it.

Their relationship was full of aggression, games and manipulation, there was no place for an innocent child in this chaos. Tears poured silently from her eyes. She had to get away, she had to leave this brutal fantasy land. Jezebel had to get away from Jake and that crazy hold he had on her heart.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
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How could this possibly be based on fifty shades when this was first submitted in 2008??! THINK next time, you idiot!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
wow -this is no where near fifty shades

Loved it keep up the great work. Fifty shades is pg-13 compared to this work. Thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
fifty shades of grey?????

Clearly this series is based off that book. No shade though. It's still he great. I can see the differences. Besides no one said you couldn't be inspired. Excellent take though.

redwitchredwitchabout 12 years agoAuthor
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@ lisaisalefty- Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it.

P.S.- I think everyone's inner grammar-fiend goes a little crazy when reading this story, lol.

Urz,

Z (RW)

lisaisaleftylisaisaleftyabout 12 years ago
this is really good!

The grammar fiend inside of me is itching to get her hands on this to fix the grammar/spelling/improper word usage issues. Other than that, I really like it.

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