by michaellajones
Why the JD, Most men I know wouldn't turn to the bottle. Real men keep a sober head. I bet 50% of the men in this country don't have whiskey in their homes.
The least the author could do was to give the MC a good taste in whiskey. JD is fucking rot gut. Pretty much the same story as all the others on Literotica.
100 big blazing stars for the writer and JD, excellent sipping whiskey from tn. What a great Read, Great Story, Great writing, Great effort and the Cheaters get taken down a notch really hard! I loved it. Great Happy Ending. I really loved the Hospital Visit and the extra punch in the eye! LOL way to go! The throwing the cheating wife out! Buster2U
Ending too abrupt. But a good btb. Not usually my type of story but it worked here. He was principled and forthright and she killed his love for her. Full stop. Ironically I believe her that it was mediocre sex because she felt guilty and was drawn in by the illicit thrill, but then again that is one of the most shallow of reasons.
I agree with others, needed more follow up to give voice to our assumptions (Bob divorced and renting an apartment, Claire humiliated and on leave for mental fatigue, humiliated to lose her marriage for two lame sessions of infidelity. Steven starts a romance with Sammi to help mellow the heartache... and to burn the ex-wife a little more with her ex-husband hooking up and marrying her sister.
I liked the story. I think he should have started up a relationship with Sammi. That should have been half the story.
I read it again and I still like it. I will admit that he left too many clues pointing back to him and I suspect the police will visit him soon, but that's reality and this is fiction where justice is paid out personally.
Steve said it all, “Fuck off , you cheating bitch!” Old Bob got his arse klcked too. Great story. Unfortunately the old bi/cuck ic69Hunter was offended by the BTB. Bless his wormy little heart.
Rather abrupt ending. Would have liked to have learned what ended up happening to the wife and boyfriend. Did the boyfriend skip town, afraid of more retribution? Did the ex-wife and boyfriend hook up later? What about more retribution on the wife? Aside from being divorced, it didn't seem like much happened to her. And the MC never had any hardcore proof. If the wife decided to challenge the divorce, which I would assume would have adultery named as a reason, there was no physical proof.
Ending too short. Did the MC hook up with Sammi after the divorce? Would have liked to have seen some evidence collected for Bob's wife.
Good story but not great.
Just another cheating bitch. It would be interesting to see, if divorce laws were made to be fair to both parties, how much that would put a damper on the women who cheat. The more I read these stories, the more I understand why men don’t want to get married!
What a drunk asshole. I hate cheating too, but I couldn't really see why she loved him or wanted to be with him. Good riddance.
Good story, well written. I just wish the author wrote more at the end about Claire and how he left her with very little and she never recovered from it for the rest of her life. Of course, that is what I would have written. 5 stars
Why do you authors always have the guy go into the bottle. Always to excess. It's an overused and pointless trope.
What other point I would like to make. One doesn't feel love and heart for the person that trashed him.
What he's feeling lost and loved for is the woman she used to be a woman to be The woman he thought she was. The woman he sees before him now is a doppelganger. She only looks like the person he used to love if you were starting out fresh and new. A woman like this who had never even date her. I like this cold cool calculating way i've exposing And then trashing her. Actually ruthless precise to the point and final.
Anon the bottle is exactly right.
And why did he bother hiding at the driving range if he was going to hit him in the hospital?
Well, old Bob got his nuts thumped but Claire only got booted out of the house, so much for an epic BTB. Without any physical proof of her infidelity it's just his word against hers. The ending was kind of rushed and left us hanging.
I like this limme, sory, this Brit, I understand him fully and completely. I would do and say exactly the same things.
Damn I miss good ole JD. Used to love kickin back with a blackjack neat or just doing BlackJack shots until you were nice and loose. Haven’t had one in about 36 years. Now that’s depressing. Excellent story. Five stars plus an invisible star for the choice of alcohol!