Immortal Gift of Beauty Ch. 03

Well, the switch in Marina and Sharon was a surprise. And Carol's rection to Hank standing up was monumental, she finally realized her boy was a man. She does seem as bit hypocritical though, getting excited about the idea of a young lover, but getting jealous when her husband merely looks at another woman. Insecure in her own attributes maybe? Well, on with the tale!

Carol, Hanks Mom is a trip. spends a vacation week and all the previous day with Boise and then calls her a Bimbo, LOL

Had a good laugh at work when I heard "Walking on Sunshine" on the radio.

Wow! You put this story together very well, with some twists to make it more interesting. The characters' dialog was excellent and propelled the story along nicely. Your descriptions were so good that I could see each of them in my mind's eye as I read and emotionally invested in the two lovers. You put a lot of thought into this and are a gifted writer. Will look forward to reading more of your stories. Thank you.

Wow excellent story. So happy for the two of them. The parent’s thing will sort it’s self out when they come to see how much love there is in the relationship. I have been told real life stories similar to this and have seen the happiness of the couples involved, in some cases it take years to settle down the objections of some people and unfortunately some people take their misplaced objections to their graves.

That was some great storytelling. Thanks for sharing.

That was a absolutely amazing story, from start to finish. Your writing is perfect and I know you could have ended it in so many different says but I think the way you did it was perfect.

Have loved every twist and turn so far having lived it in real life myself. Keep it going.

Thank you, thank you! Been a while since I enjoyed a story this much😀😀

No time to write more as I HAVE to read the next chapter!!!!

I agree with the earlier comment: mom is sadly biased. It can only be hoped that reconciliation ion is possible.

Great job!

You go girl,

but not with my son

No shortage of drama, I'm looking forward to seeing how you wrap this up.

Very well done! Several cuts above the typical. Will continue to read your stories and wait for more.

Sela Ward for sure, but who leapt to mind was Joan Severence, and Nia Vardelos, too.

And here’s to all the young men, who aren’t smart enough to understand that a mature woman has such huge gifts to offer until they are themselves not so young. Such a lost opportunity for all save the lucky few lol!.

Keep up the good work, hope to read more about this lovely duo.

That's a pretty abrupt change? Does that overstress Hank & Brosie's relationship? Do his parents change their minds? Please, don't cut us off in mid-story.

Only thing is there’s more to tell. Please write more chapters