In The Night Garden Pt. 04

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"OH COME ON!" He cried out into the hallway. He was furious. How dare she leave him like that, lead him on and tease him. He didn't like this side of her, the side that could refuse him, deny him what was his.

He'd soon see to that.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I have some chapters left to read

And I really hope I won't be left hanging. I'm already looking forward to your future projects. This is just too good as debut work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good writing

I like your writing style. Sexy, exciting and attractive :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Job? Is that you?

"Oh COME ON!"

"What does the guy in the $6,000 (Hugo Boss) suit have to do to get a blow job around here?"

Definitely Job from Arrested Development.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Awesome

Firstly since the first instalment this has been amazing, a good build up, solid pace and very good descriptively. This is a reallistic story that could happen to anyone.......

If I'm going to criticize, it will be the last instalment (part4) the son of a tycoon was stretching it a little, but even then you saved it.

Now I don't want you to rush the next installment/s, but HURRY up!! Seriously I can't wait! Xxx

AEisMeAEisMealmost 10 years ago

I agree with the others. I hope this story will lean more toward reluctance than non-consent. Something about Tom slowly having to seduce her and wear her down sounds so incredibly hot. I also really love the level of detail you include. Just the right amount to provide the reader a visual but not too much for us to get bored with it. Can't wait for more!

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