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Click hereVeronica smirked, turning her computer screen so they could see the data readout. "That is where I had a significant advantage: I was tapped into your UTD's. Have you noticed how much water the two of you are drinking right now?"
Desirée and Kalyani stared at each other, then down at their glasses.
"Please, keep going," the Guild administrator said. "According to your UTD's, you're severely dehydrated and need to replenish your fluids. Also, Kalyani, you mentioned before meeting Din and Relg that you would shortly need to go to the washroom. Do you still feel that way?"
Kalyani's mouth dropped open. She slowly shook her head.
"Precisely," Veronica said. "And that was the final piece of the puzzle. Biological waste products, properly diluted, are often used as fertilizer for plant life. It also explains why both Relg and Din were so obsessed with having anal sex with you; they wanted to harvest your waste products to see if it could be used as food."
Gruustok shook his head. "I cannot fault your analysis, Ma'am, but your conclusions are completely preposterous. It makes no biological sense that plant matter could develop sentience."
"Earth bumblebees are capable of flight, even though it should be aerodynamically impossible," Veronica pointed out. "Either we need to recalibrate our scanners, or develop new methods of monitoring their brainwave patterns. Nevertheless, I think it is significant that Guild Courtesan Tanner and I came to the exact same conclusion, independent of one another and I will write my report to that effect. This also means we might have something the Throzaahli wants, which will aid negotiations immeasurably."
She smiled warmly at her courtesans. "Now, I believe Desirée and Kalyani have more than earned a well-deserved shower and rest. We're both grateful for what you've done today."
Gruustok looked troubled, but he inclined his head graciously. "I agree. Thanks to the both of you. I would also suggest that you two get a full-body scan so that we know whether or not the Throzaahli implanted any sort of devices on your bodies."
"Agreed," Veronica Franco said. "After that, you're free for the rest of the day. Dismissed."
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Author's Note: I'm having trouble deciding who will feature in Desirée's next adventure. Would you prefer Veronica Franco, the Guild administrator, plus some empaths, in the next story? Or would you like Cyraena the Draco courtesan? Either one will be pretty hot, so everyone wins. Please leave a public comment below, stating your choice. Thanks in advance, and thanks for reading. :)
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Anonymousabout 13 years agoPlease keep writing and developing Desiree & the sci-fi world you've developed. Any & all future stories should be as fully developed as this one! Great read.
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michassover 14 years agothe writer Larry Niven described a number of sentient species, including I think a sort of carnivorous plant.
A couple of points, first a minor one, muscle fatigue is now thought not to be due to the build up of toxins. It seems silly to mention this anyway, certainly not more than once.
A major point is that the system to repay debt here makes no sense, and is not a sign of an enlightened culture. If they go back to Earth in the middle of training they are actually paid. If not they are a form of slave, forced to work to pay off this debt. You mention at one point that they can choose to do many things with this education, but not until they have paid off the debt. They also have no privacy as their every move and even thoughts can be monitored--by extension if the implanted chip can see what the courtesan sees then it can tap into whatever the person is thinking; remember vision, sound, etc, are constructs of the brain, not the direct outputs of the eyes, ears, etc.
Funkydrummerover 14 years agoAuthorSorry about taking so long (damned real life creeping in again!) but Chapter 10 of Intergalactic Courtesan has been submitted and it'll be on the boards in about 72 hours. What's it about? You'll see! ;)
