- NonHuman
- Jack's Snow Day
- Page 15
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Finally they both settled down back into their bodies and sighed in unison. This made them both laugh and Elissa smiled seeing the genuine happiness on his face as his laugh came from deep inside.
When she'd sent him on this mission she was hopeful the genuine kindness and warmth of the Shreen would reach that place in Jack's heart which was still wounded so long after his captivity. She'd done all she could to bring him back and had been mostly successful but something still blocked him.
Knowing his loving nature, Jack was the perfect choice for the mission and her faith had been justified. He'd found their pain and he'd healed it for them. They in turn had healed his. Everyone was happy.
Elissa had the man she'd fallen in love with, all of him. She was happiest of all.
- COMMENTS
Jodaily16 days agoAlien orgy sex meister! What a man. Another great story. My only complaint was that it needed better proofreading. The occasional wrong word was a little distracting. Still got a solid 5 stars!!
And Bal and Gee are weenies. Wah, too cold!
Gadf772 months agoThis story is absolutely brilliant ! One small question I've got is that you wrote about Jack visiting Earth to get winter clothes, etc. But when he gets to the Shreen world, he doesn't have them and is cold untill the Shreen give him a Skrahak coat ? That was a bit confusing. And I found that Elelris was a bit annoying to pronounce lol. Maybe Eleris would've been better. But, no worries.
Michael56Smith3 months agoBurntRedstone's writings, .... the Jack Danner series, the Ben Sheperd series, the Satyr series (Henry Gable), ... and the (Ed Walters), the One who understands Trilogy plus, ... and newest, the Joseph Neuman prequel trilogy, ... and pretty much everything else this gentleman has written, all GOOD, ... no, closer to Excellent, ... as in, you cannot go wrong reading any of them, ...
Loved this Jack Danner installment, and thought the twins were darlings, ... more of them in future stories please, ... thank you, ... ;-) ttfn
tinfoilhat5 months agoI really liked the Sheperd series and thought it might be the best thing I've read here. This series is just as good. I've decided that BurntRedstone has to be in the top 3, or so, of writers here. I'm enjoying the ride immensely.
