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Click hereI looked at the tired-sated-looking newly mated couple on the platform. They were breathing raggedly in equal contentment. I knew that I was healing, my heart would mend but I think it was best for now if I avoid bumping into Jerry whenever I can, at least until I was fully mended. I looked at James again but he was gone. I whirled around, many were finished rutting although some were still howling in pleasure.
"Gracielle?" Haylie called a few minutes later. She was flushed. "That was the most erotic thing I've ever done," she grinned. "With Steve too," she giggled. "Hey, are you OK?" she noticed that I wasn't paying attention to her.
"I -- I'm OK," I said, "I was just...looking for James,"
"Well, you'll see him tomorrow then, c'mon, let's go back home, I'm tired," Haylie said as she pulled me. We went out the Sacred Chamber as a few others started to pile out. The newly mated couple would return to the Alpha Quarter a few minutes later. I would be OK. I promised to myself with a smile.
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Jayleen88about 15 years agoAuthorThank you so much for your very sweet comment. I'm speechless in a very happy way... :D
Anonymousabout 15 years agoMy lady, you possess a writing skill that far surpasses your youthful age and overall inexperience (you did say this was your first story). Moreover, you present your story in a manner that is both creative and captivating, all the while delineating the erotic scenes in a classy, tasteful (dare I say "romantic") way; in other words, you rely on that which is artistic in lieu of sheer explicitness and vulgarity. Anyway, I hope you never change your style of penmanship ... take care!
Jayleen88about 15 years agoAuthorI hope you'll love the next CHAPTERS in the series!! :D Thanks for VOTING & COMMENTING!!
