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oldsage_1oldsage_14 months ago

Great story and I have lots of catching up to do!

Cheers

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I WAS disappointed that the promised sequel in '23 was replaced by this unrelated Novel. Until -

UponatimemanUponatimeman3 months ago

A gem of a story. My 2nd time reading it as I fell in love with the characters and their journey together the first time through. It taught me a lot about the dynamic between dd/lg I hadn’t grasped before. And it’s hot too! You gave them distinct voice and style, her bratty snark is wonderful and playful and he is barely in control, running to keep up with her and loving every minute of it. Too much fun?

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Update: May 18, 2024 Black Box has always been the weird kid in my catalogue. It was the first story I ever tried to write for the site. When it didn't work, I put it aside and ended up spending the next year writing Little Packages. Then, armed with everything I learned writ...

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