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"Kerry," she said a little experimentally with a smile as they stood together near the steaming pool, "I like it as a good name for me to use in the dark.
I am trying to get used to this new voice of yours and the way of acting," she smiled at him.
"I was used to your shyness over the years. I even liked it when you sounded unsure of yourself. I like how you speak now. I only wonder if I might miss the old way a little, that's all."
He sighed, "Brin, I am the same shy boy. I only remembered the lessons that you taught me about behaving like a destroyer -- or what most would want to hear from one. I can be one easily, thanks to you.
But ,... between us, you are the one who has had a real life. You are the arena slayer, and you know more of loving than I ever will. I know that. Between us, you will likely always be the one who leads in a quiet place, ..."
She looked at him with a small smile just beginning on her lips.
"-in the dark," he said, looking around them a little wishfully, "taking what you want."
He sighed again, admiring her face and her mane, "I think that I would let you do, um, anything, ... that you, ... wanted , ... to uh, ... do, ..."
Her smile grew a little wider and she chuckled very softly as he finished his thought.
"... to me."
He looked up at her eyes a little shyly, not quite knowing where to start or how to begin this, "I, uh, at least, I hope, ..."
He smiled a tiny bit in an uncertain way as his words stumbled further, "... that you will."
Brin thought that she must be falling for him all over again on the spot. She was sure that she'd never been so aroused quite so quickly in her long life.
Kerry saw that her eyes now looked so large to him, beautiful here in the dim light as her pupils dilated even more.
She stared, and he stared back, a little uncertain now about what he'd said.
"You uh, ... you will, won't you?"
She threw her arms around him and pulled him to her tightly. His arms went around her waist, but he was really being held by her, and hoping that she wouldn't crush him, but other than that, he didn't care what she did to him. Kerry was happy.
Brin kissed him then and teased his lips apart. Once she had his mouth open, she changed her attack, fitting her open mouth to his exactly so that their teeth could pass each other. He moaned softly as he reached up to feel his fingers in her long hair.
Brin sighed in her joy as she did the same, and her tongue in his mouth led the dance, though she tightened her grip in his hair just a little so that he knew that he was hers. They stopped and looked into each other's goatish eyes.
"So the destroyer can feel love now?" she asked, thrilling to see him nod a little. Her laugh there in her throat almost raised his hackles at how happy she sounded.
"I think it might have been at least a little benefit to me that we were apart. I saw that a part of you has gotten a little bigger from how I remember it to be."
Brin's eyes widened a little at what she felt pressed against her after that and she chuckled.
"A lot bigger than how I remember it," she said. "I think that you favor your mother's side in this. My good fortune that you're hung like an ass, but, ... I wish to know one thing, Kerry."
He stood with his arms around her neck, smiling with his eyes closed. Her question caused him to look at her and wait for the rest.
She whispered what was on her mind into his ear as she nuzzled her nose there, "Do you wish to be my boy, Kerry?"
His sigh thrilled her to hear. "More than anything," he whispered back, "I have always wanted you."
"Listen, Appolyon," she breathed, "It does not matter to me who leads between us when we are alone. What is important is that we learn of each other, not only always me teaching."
She almost snickered, though she was very quiet about it, not wanting to break the mood, "I have such trouble believing all of this. I am here with you where I never thought that I would be. I almost do not know what I want to do with you first."
She sighed and smiled to him in the dim light as she felt his hand on her breast. "The sweetest sort of predicament to be faced with, but this night had already been so very long, and I think that we should begin somewhere."
Brin thought that life was such a strange thing. She found that she now held kind thoughts for the one called Zele where not long ago she'd had murder in her heart. The strange female had come to her in a quiet moment to tell her something about Kerry.
She should have known it anyway. He was pure in that he had little to feel ashamed over. Brin wanted more than anything for what they shared to be whatever they both enjoyed.
She knew that they were a somewhat strange set, this strong and shapely mare and her young stallion, but she'd show him the roles for his consideration later. Tonight was for their pleasure.
She reached only a little to caress his flank and then his bottom, but after a moment, she gave in to her thoughts to slip her hand under his tail.
Kerry groaned in joy as he pressed against her and stood up on the tips of his hooves in response to her teasing probe between his cheeks.
It brought them face to face and they lost themselves in each other's sighs.
- COMMENTS
Edwarusabout 12 years agoMe for one i like it that there are multiple main characters or just all the difrent point of views i think personally that when u have alot of point of views in one story it makes the story fuller in that you see the reasoning behind each character and why they do what they do and for what reason
Mostera1about 12 years agoThe characters enhance the story because they are well written. Love is a form of binding even in the world of demons. Superb. As long as they stay in character which you will I am sure ensure this will be great. There are possible spinoffs but I really like the path you chose.
Thankyou!
M1
TaLtos6about 12 years agoAuthorI'm not sure how to respond here. There are several ways that I could have written this. I mean, I could have brought the clutch of them together and they go off and force Tobias' rise among the lords, or fight Gorek to death and been done. That was my original intent, but I get requests to keep this going, so I have a broader scope in mind. To oversimplify, perhaps, think of the differences between a half-hour sitcom, a 90 minute movie, a soap opera and colorful mini-series, which is what this has become in some respects.
I get what you're saying, believe me. It wasn't even my intent to have this pair of characters involved with each other, really. I needed one character who had the wherewithall to be the ace in the hole that Lily (Mother) requires for her machinations. The ones who serve the Appolyon have logistical and organizational needs as well, so I think that it would be a rather two-dimensional work to overlook them. That's where Brinack comes in, so I needed her to have a reason to have maintained their focus for so freaking long.
Another aspect that I wish to respectfully point to is that these are not humans, so a lot of the signposts which exist in our relationships are right out the window for them. This bunch is finding ways to have actual relationships where most on this plane wouldn't think beyond a fast and forceful semi-rape of whoever one can catch and overpower enough to get them to hold still for it. That's one of the things that separate them from the majority.
The down-side is that I'm a little forced to move the focus (or the viewer's camera) around more than I'd really want to, and there's always the touchstone that must be returned to now and then, which is that this is Literotica, so there is some expectation for the odd love scene here and there. Ok, some of them are really odd, given the nature of the beasts in this.
I'm not just writing this without a plan. There actually is one, though I'll admit that it's a bit longer and more torturous than it was at the outset, and the poor notebook that I scribbled the original idea out on is now a rather beaten-up and dog-eared thing.
For those who grow weary of this, I can offer the hope that the crisis won't be long in coming from here on out, and other than one more really odd relationship and a few "WTF" moments for humans minding their business, this is nearing its end.
Jedi_Khanabout 12 years agoIt seems to me that you are getting sidetracked by all these new characters you keep introducing and then putting them in relationships with the love of their lives. Yes, I understand that you're making a point that the relationships are what set them apart, but honestly, it's starting to sound like a broken record now.
When writing a story, most authors limit the number of characters they focus on to four, maybe even six if they do things right. If they don't limit themselves, then the reader loses track of who the main characters are and the author winds up with comments complaining about the number of characters like this one. As it stands now, I see the four main characters of this story as Toby, Maezou, Zele, and Mother, with everyone else being supporting characters that should come and go as needed. However, despite my understanding of this, it also seems to me that the four main characters have been pushed to side, thus putting them in the position of supporting characters, which is not where they are supposed to be.
So, to summarize, please stop introducing new characters and refocus on Toby, Maezou, Zele, and Mother, the main characters. You've got a good story here, but it's getting a bit sluggish with all the new characters and relationships.
