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Click here"Use the toast," he counseled.
X.X.X
"Remember? This is Bah Bear?" Dick explained to Jennica. "He won't let anything get you."
"And Henry and Sam are right here too," Carmen said.
"And Paw-paw's the police," Henry chimed in.
"Going to be a long seven days," Dick muttered as Carmen read them a bedtime story.
The End.
**Author's Note: I write these stories for my pleasure. I post them here for your enjoyment.
Thank you for reading my stories.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoThere is a sweet touch to you stories and the characters feel like real people.
drycreeksover 2 years agoI read some of these comments geeze we r not reading a technical manual on the proper way to handle a bank robbery. Some of us kno a rifle is the best weapon for the job but from where i sit this was a very enjoyable story. Some mistakes were made but hey i just gloss over them go with the intent and enjoyed it very much. Thanks for ur effort n hard work. N for all the complainers out there all u have to do is pick up a pen or sit down at ur computer n have at it. Job well done.
Anonymousover 2 years agoHas anyone else noticed that in 90% of stories and media, foster parents are either rapists or taking the government’s money and ignoring the child, you Americans are an odd bunch.
No1_OfConsequenceover 2 years agoPlease get a fight scene editor or a technicl consultant! You mentioned them using cell phones, so body armor would be a thing, and no police department would be using service revolvers in a cell phone era. There are just too many disadvantages to them for police service issue these days.
The bank shoot out. Yikes. Police officers have been trained to shoot center mass since the 1930s at least. There are many reasons for this, but the bottom line is that an armed opponent may not be as impressed as you are when you shoot them, and this goes double for extremities. Even knee shots. Yes, there are units out there that are taught to employ pelvic girdle shots to immobilize their targets. However, said targets are engaged after being immobilized as a means to end the threat. Worth noting that this is a tactic employed with rifles, as handguns do not have the power to consistently perform such tasks. Handguns suck for shooting people in general, but have the advantage that they are portable and rifles don't fit in belt holsters. In the event that your opponents are also wearing body armor, hits to the torso still hurt, and the armor doesn't protect the beltline or throat. Also, shots through the armholes and headshots are effective against people wearing body armor.
Outside of that, it's an excellent story.
Anonymousalmost 3 years ago"Elise broke her gaze with the reporter, stared down hard at the makeshift podium she was standing behind, swallowed hard then looked up at Chelsea Guidry again." Not pounding on JB, I see this all the time. She's standing behind the LECTERN, looking down at the PODIUM she's standing on. Podium, podiatry, having to do with feet and/or standing? Look it up, don't say that just because some jackass reporter says it on TV.
Whew, rant over.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoThis is a heartwarming story. I love Darren and Elise together, even imagine Darren with a good bit of hair on that manly chest. They love each other so very much. Their lovemaking was delightful.
