Lucky Day

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Invited to her place to photograph her in the nude.
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She invited me to her home. No one was there except her. She had made sure of that as we had planned. She was beautiful, dusky, had brown eyes, the cutest smile and very long dark hair. She was one of the hottest girl I knew. I was lucky she fell in love with me. She is the one who asked me out. I couldn't help but say yes.

Today we have planned photoshoot just for fun not that I am much of a photographer. She was wearing a short skirt and top that which is exactly up to her waist. Of course the shoot was going to be of her stripping. We went to the living room where there is a couch. She sat on the couch one leg under other one's knee. The window opposite the couch provided ample light. I liked the way she was sitting, she had one hand holding the brim of her skirt and the other hand supporting her head she had a hint of smile on her face this was the first photo I took of her that day. Next I asked her to put all hair to one side and face the window hair look extremely sexy under the light it brought on her face. Couple more photos with her facing me and a seductive look on her face. It was time to take it to the next level.

She started taking off the top as I take more snaps. Her 34c breasts would have attracted anyone's attention even with a bra and it did mine with black lace bra I snapped more pics as she on the shoulder straps on both sides. With both straps off she cupped her breasts with the bra but the nipples exposed. It's enough to make any guy completely hard. She dropped the bra next to her on the couch. Her breasts were really perky. She grabbed her left breast with her right hand, her right breast trapped between her arm and chest. She looked at me with a sexy smile and her head slightly tilted forward. She started massaging her breasts and I kept snapping pictures. The room was getting so hot. She started massaging both breasts now. To see her nipples through the gap between the thumbs and fingers her breasts firmly in her hand was very arousing. She was now circling her index finger along the areola and occasionally pinching her nipples. She started moaning as her sensitive nipples pleasure her.

Next I asked her to concentrate on the bottom half. She stood up inserted her hand between the waist and skirt slowly pushing her skirt along with panties down. Her mouth slightly open an her eyes almost closed. She pushed them down to her ankles and placed her hands on her hips. She had slightly thick thighs that are so attractive. You could see part of her inner labia.

She was completely hairless except for her head. She seductively locked her lips as she grabbed one her breasts with one hand and opened her slit with the other. I was lucky to be in the same room let alone photograph all this. And this was just the beginning. She took a bottle of lotion from behind the couch. She started pouring it across her chest from one breast to the other. She poured some in her hand and started rubbing it all over her breasts. Eyes closed head tilted to the window her breasts were now glistening with oil. She teased her nipples eagerly this time moaning longer multiple times. She rubbed oil all over her upper body.

She took the bottle poured more in her hand and a lot more on her waist rubbing it down once over her mound. She oiled up her thighs and calves. Once done with the feet she concentrated on her pussy with more oil. She rubbed her clit a couple of times in the process making aroused sounds and exhaling hot breaths. She pushed her mind forward arching her back placing her fingers slightly inside her lips. She opened them wide as she stricken them inside out. Her inner labia was large enough to be seen even if the lips were not parted. She ruined oil in the gap between her pussy and thighs. Her body looked glorious shinning in the light. Finding it too hard to photograph her much longer. She tried to stretch her lips and laughed as they slipped out of her fingers.

Only one part left her back she turned around and arched her sexy ass sticking out. She looked over her shoulder at me as she poured oil into her butt and her back. She poured to much and it was dripping onto the floor. She rubbed her upper back with oil still dripping which she didn't care about. She rubbed oil on the sides of her butt in circular motion. Then she suddenly spread her cheeks using both her hands letting them slowly slide close. She ran her finger from top to bottom between her butt checks. Rubbed down to the area between her pussy and asshole. She spent some time rubbing that area and gradually slipped her finger unto her pussy. Her finger kept going inside out. She dropped onto the floor on her hands and knees and mother the words take me.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Keep on writing...

The problem with any language is that, even if one reads and writes perfectly, it is still very difficult to create a gripping erotic story. It has got to do with the right descriptions, pauses, twists. It has got to do with being either minimalist or detailed, depending on the topic and situation. Describing sex without being boring, repetitive, sterile or overly detailed is very difficult indeed. Many people who master their own language perfectly couldn't do it without a lot of practice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Ask Literotica

about it's volunteer editor service. I believe it's free. Go to Literotica home page and follow the directions from there. That will tell you how to find a proof reader or editor. I liked what you wrote and am sure it could be better with some help. Best wishes from the U.K.

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insininsinover 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks

As everyone figured English is not my first language. I will work on my language better on future submissions. It's my first time so thank you guys for the feed back. I really appreciate the support and suggestions everyone's given.

NWRaptorNWRaptorover 6 years ago
A Suggestion

Insin:

You show considerable talent for writing. Thank you for sharing this effort with our little group.

Just because English is not your native tongue is no reason not to express your ideas in writing. Unfortunately, most on-line translators like Google and Babblefish translate literally (word for word) without any consideration of grammatical errors. Some words don't translate well. or at all. from one language to another, especially slang terms. All that can make following your storyline written a task, and not every reader wants to go through the effort to mentally search for your meaning and rewrite your story in their mind. Basically, they're not trying to be rude - just lazy, and too used to being spoon-fed perfect English.

Let me suggest that you consider asking one of the Literotica authors whose works you admire and respect to act as a proofreader/editor for you. Extra points if they are bi-lingual and capable of translating for you as well. More likely, you'll have to use an on-line translator and your proofreader can make grammar and verb tense corrections for you from that.

Keep writing.

NWRaptor

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Gobbledygook

Maybe it would have been readable if you had written in your own language and then used Google Translate. Oh, um, perhaps that was what you did? Unreadable. One star.

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