Man, Woman, and Meaning Between

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He got out of his chair and dug around in the secret liquor cabinet that we all pretended wasn't there. He poured us both a glass of scotch. He stared behind me for a moment, probably imagining his own adventures in China.

"I wish all your assignments went this well," he said.

"Most of them aren't this cute," I said. "Sir."

He knocked his glass against mine. "Next time a pretty girl needs a tour around Shanghai, I think I'll find someone else."

"Anna would appreciate that."

--

Once we arrived back in the states, Anna and I never really separated. I still kept a room with my sister but mostly just stayed with my new girlfriend.

Her company did end up going through with the deal. She'd be spending lots of time in China for the next year.

Anna's head was resting on my chest, our naked bodies still sweaty, breathing hard.

"I can spend my weekends in Shanghai," she said. "Anything else you want to show me?"

"You have no idea."

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Excellent!

EroticCupcakeEroticCupcake7 months agoAuthor

Thanks for the comment. I'll consider my use of epilogues in shorter works. It's also possible this one needed to be tightened up.

Very likely I will revisit themes of professional romance in and out of China.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

wonderful story, love the thoughts about travel, and being in the moment. I agree the ending either needs to go to the end as a story and not cliff notes, or leave at a point that finishes. Like maybe, elaborate getting on the plane, getting the seats, and fall asleep on the way to a new chapter. Please write more of this, you have the talent for it.

EroticCupcakeEroticCupcake7 months agoAuthor

Thanks for the comment. That is a good idea. I eluded to something along those lines (not Mark's CEO, the other company). Anna is "special" but is that because she's just awesome or connected? Both characters are meant to be extremely competent. Even if they have no connections, they'll be fine.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc7 months ago

Enjoyed the story but feel we were left seriously hanging. I was thinking she was the CEOs daughter, but you missed that possible plot line - LOL! If you're going to dabble in this genre, jump in. Leaving the story unfinished is unacceptable! LOL! 4.4*

EroticCupcakeEroticCupcake7 months agoAuthor

Thanks for the comment. I'm going to o experiment with the format. Multipart (so far) helps me focus and debug. This was my first attempt at longer. I'll keep looking to add tools.

PrfsrPrfsr7 months ago

To add to my earlier comment: I see most of your stories included here are multi-part. Personally, I prefer shorter ones like this one as I can fit them into my schedule.

PrfsrPrfsr7 months ago

Excellent, excellent, excellent!!! (I am very hard to please.)

joy_of_cookingjoy_of_cooking7 months ago

Your love for this city shines through. I haven't been there in decades and yet your writing was so evocative I felt as if I were remembering every place you described, even the ones that didn't exist back then.

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