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Click herePerhaps my monster will repay me one day, but it hasn't happened yet. I truly despise my William. I hate what I had to give him to learn a lesson, I hate that he made me feel powerless, and I hate that I've grown so fond of using him.
I'm sure I'll ruin his life at some stage. Until then, I'm making the best of life with William in it- I can't let him have all the fun.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoUsually peak at the last few paragraphs to determine if the story was worth reading. I was disappointed at first. But I decided to read the whole story, and I came to love the more subtle, psychological and very hot revenge to the story. 5/5 stars.
Tales_From_Farboroughabout 6 years agoAuthorThanks for the kind words- now that I have a story published I'll flesh out my user page :) x
luedonabout 6 years agoi saw your comment in the Feedback Portal and the idea of a fresh take in any story here is worth exploring. It's not easy to produce something creatively different with erotic stories.
Anr thanks too T_F_F. Dorado was right. This was creatively different and well-written as well. I liked the slow progression and the wonderful self-delusion (really?) Maria The Innocent displays all the way through.
Lue
Ps: T_F_F, your biog notes are sadly uninformative. I (for one) like to know something about interesting new authors on Literotica and what influences they have on their stories. Might it be possible to add a couple of points?
Doradoabout 6 years agoThanks, I enjoyed this story. It had a fresh take on a classic situation and flowed nicely. Good job
