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Fifth confession: "I knew better a wonderful half. Now I hope to know better the other half."
Six confession: "Being with A thinking on B. So exciting."
Now guess who wrote what.
- COMMENTS
HectorBidonover 7 years agoThis story nicely describes the thrill of being with someone else from your social group, someone appreciably older or younger than you are. I loved the conversation between you and Heather while you were locked together. To me the quaint English added a compelling European-ness to the narrative that I really liked, Certainly you are a very good writer, quaintness notwithstanding.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoAwesome idea, but english is not your strong point. Please please work on your vocabulary and translation. Keep the idea, but most of the last half didn't qualify as english.
Anonymousover 9 years agoSome parts were almost unreadable with the lack of editing.
