Modified Ch. 06

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He stared for a moment "GG big fella, I've got the tits to go with your cock." He pulled her close then with the dexterity of someone who has had a lot of recent practice, unhooked her bra which slid to the floor. He kissed down her neck, then onto her body, her breasts and lingered on her firm nipples, sucking and nibbling which evoked pleasurable noises from Alex. He decided to spend more time, that being appreciated by the tailor, who handled her breasts and squeezed them around his head. It was an astonishing experience, but it wasn't enough to distract Jack from unzipping the skirt and sending it to the floor, now Alex only sporting a tiny cream g string. He worked lower on her stomach, then around her thighs, finally returning to her pussy taking a few moments to rub over the silken surface. The g string was soaked with her juices, and jack swiftly removed it.

Alex was shuddering with pleasure. Usually her sexual experience was men (and women) fixated on her tits, and while Jack had spent plenty of time there, he was working very hard to pleasure her in other ways. It was both unexpected and wonderful, and her moans of pleasure made sure that Jack understood that.

She shrieked when he unexpectedly slid one, then two fingers into her wet and waiting push. He took his time, sucking and nibbling on her clit, while vigorously fingering her pussy. In only a few minutes she came, a gush of fluid accompanying a load moan of pleasure that seemed to last for minutes, but was probably no more than 30 seconds. It might just have been the orgasm of her life. So far.

Jack could feel for legs trembling, so he scooped her up in his arms and walked to the couch. Gently placing her down, she noticed his cock firm and ready for action, perhaps noticing it for the first time since her last visit. Her titty wanks were legendary, indeed as Jack had experienced, but this time she just wanted to fuck him. She pulled him to the seat beside her, and then straddled his lap, placing the cock at the entrance to her pussy. She slid down in a single motion, carefully ensuring she was capable of taking his length and girth.

"Never, ever been so full Jack. That cock is a thing of beauty." Jack grunted an acknowledgement, while taking turns sucking her nipples, and using his hands on her thighs, guiding her up and down. Jack had never been with a women with such enormous breasts, but he was smitten by her personality and joy of pleasure. She was into this and let him know it, her sounds and her body in a tango of pleasure which Jack only along for the ride, so to speak.

After 20 minutes and three further orgasms, Jack could see that Alex was flagging just a little. He flipped her onto her back, and placing her heels on his shoulders, started to pummel her pussy fast and deep. The change of attack touched new nerves in Alex, who was literally having the fuck of her life, and she encouraged him on, urging him to fill her up.

Jack was mesmerised by the sight of her breasts bouncing in time to his thrusts, and before long was thrust deep and screaming his orgasms, while he pumped his seed deep inside. He collapsed beside her, while they both caught their breath. "Spectacular" was all he could manage. Alex only nodded, still in the throes of her most recent orgasm.

Eventually she was able to utter something coherent. "I think that may have been the fuck of a lifetime Jack. Never felt pleasure like that with anyone before, I need to go shortly, and you need to get a good nights rest before your flight, but can I see you again sometime?" Jack said for sure, and asked if she was up for a plus one sometime too. She smiled and said she would be up for anything with him.

After a shower, and a change into a spare top that Alex had brought with her, they called a taxi and again Jack bade farewell to another remarkable woman. He ordered in some dinner, ate and tidied up, then went to bed, completely spent. Off to America tomorrow, and he wondered what fun lay ahead for him there.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Grammar Nazi's repent!

Great first story! ok yes, some editing would help however a backup and re-read for context is the worst I have seen. Keep going great job!

EloquentmanEloquentmanalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Re: a really good story

Thank you for the kind words. I’m new to any sort of writing, and did this because eventually I felt I had a tale worth sharing. No one is compelled to like it, but I’m always pleased when someone lets me know that they do. You can read up to Chapter 10 at the moment, and I’m writing the follow up and hope to have that submitted in the next few days.

If you have any further feedback, please feel free to share with me. All feedback is welcome, even though I may not agree with some of it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
A really good story

So far this is a really good series. The other anonymous commentator is screaming at you to Edit and only 50% is readable. Okay there are a few little gaffs but NOTHING to the extent that he or she is ranting on about, and certainly nothing that detracts from the overall story and how it reads. If someone like Mr Shouty and yes I am going to attribute the previous rant to a male, then why not be constructive and point out the errors. There are some really badly written stories out there but this series is not among them. Eloquentman please keep up the good work. I only came across Modified today 06/07 and am thoroughly enjoying reading through. GJ

EloquentmanEloquentmanalmost 6 years agoAuthor

I’ve said consistently all feedback is welcome. I reached out to a number of volunteer editors and got zero replies to even a simple enquiry. This story is my first attempt at any form of creative writing, and I’m undoubtedly learning as I go. If I weren’t holding down a full time job and having caring responsibilities at home, perhaps I might go back and redo the story from the start, but I think I’m unlikely to find that sort of time.

I write to enjoy and hopefully entertain, but in that order. Based on viewing and rating feedback, I think people are enjoying my efforts. I’ll endeavour to do my best in future chapters, but bear in mind my technique is developing as I go.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
EDIT !!!! Take this whole MESS and edit it until it is at least readable from start to finish. There seems to be a very good story here but, it is unreadable in its current condition. Take it back to your computer and try to read it as it currently sta

It is only about 50% understandable in its current form. It seems like it is probably a very good story but the final editing is abominable!!!

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