Mom Named Barbie Ch. 07

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However, the longer she admired at herself in the mirror the more the persona of Barbie took over, 'let them look, I don't care', and she left the zipper where it was. Barbara smiled as she was checking out, the boy bagging her items got a thrill staring at her chest, considering his age some might think what she was doing was perverted, but in reality nothing was exposed that should not be seen and Barbara was enjoying watching the teenage boy unable to pull his eyes away from her chest.

One more stop and she would be finished; back in her small town she pulled into a space at the liquor store; here it was very probable she would be seen by someone that knew her. Her town had the reputation for being very religious but the liquor store was always crowded selling spirits for 'medicinal purposes'. Sitting in her car Barbara drew in a deep breath then stepped out and walked into the building with her head held high. Just as she suspected there were people inside she recognized, three women and probably five or six men. You would have thought over half the town was deathly ill the way the liquor was flying off the shelves.

Even though she was dressed very provocative Barbara confidently strolled through the aisles; one of the women she knew would not even speak to her, the other two said 'Hi' but only after looking her up and down with a disapproving scowl., The men made it a point to pass by her, from the front of course, multiple times giving her a huge smile saying hello; three of the guys also complimented her on how 'nice' she looked. Only one of the men acted as if he were offended by of her choice of clothing yet he suspiciously appeared in the same aisle as her too many times to be coincidence.

Although Barbara normally drank wine exclusively, she decided Barbie would be a beer and liquor kind of girl. With a bottle of bourbon and coconut rum in her hands she made her way to the register, a man probably twenty years older than her waited to ring up her purchases. The floor behind the counter was at least a foot higher than where she stood as he looked down at her. Considering the height advantage he possessed he could easily see down the front of Barbie's jacket almost to her naval, he had no reservations that it was obvious to Barbara he was staring at her huge tits.

His intentional gawking caused her to feel self-conscious about being exposed the way she was, but she shook off the uncomfortable feeling thinking that while the awkward situation was embarrassing for Barbara, Barbie welcomed the attention. She sat the bottles on the counter then with a hand on each side of her jacket she jerked the front open.

"Here, I think you need a better look. Is this what you were hoping to see?"

The man's mouth dropped open; Barbara thought his teeth were going to fall out. As she closed her jacket over her breasts he picked up the bottles, there was a beep as he scanned each one; after pressing a few buttons on the register he said,

"With the loyal customer discount that will be $16.75; I hope to see you again soon."

She knew the total was not correct, one bottle was $13.25 and the other was $12.50; she had gotten a $9 discount just for showing her tits. Barbara could not believe what she got in return for such a simple act; why had she been so reluctant all these years to flash her boobs?

Sitting in her car the significance of what she had done hit her, she had shown her tits and pussy to people she didn't know, not intimately; if someone had told her three months ago she would do either one she would have called them a liar, and now she had done both! Last summer she had thought Barb was a wild woman, but it was nothing compared to what she was doing now; the only difference was last summer she had changed her personality for the rich men she dated, this time she was changing her personality for herself. As she turned the key to start her car she whispered to herself "I'm beginning to really like this Barbie person".

Remembering she would be wearing a wig tomorrow there was no way she would be able to hide all of her thick long hair so she quickly turned into a chain hair salon near the liquor store. When the girl asked how she would like her hair cut she immediately knew what to say "I want it short, something sassy; fun and playful". When the stylist finished she could not believe the difference, her hair was shorter than it had been since she was a little girl. With the weight of her long hair gone the short style was bouncy and cute. She instantly looked at least five years younger as well as fun and playful just as she had requested; Barbara asked herself "Why didn't I do this years ago".

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MomSpoilerMomSpoiler2 months ago

The author must try to be on the point, cutting off unnecessary details that are lengthening the story. As a reader, I got tired and my horny mood got killed when I kept reading just details and no sexy action in regular intervals. Even just a sexy naughty conversation can do great rather than serious take most of the time in a story.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

With all respect to the author who provides their wor free of charge, a negative comment from an Anonymous doesn't mean it is a cowardly attack. That is playground thinking. That being said your story is incongruent with your first chapter. Take the comment as you will.

PegasusRyderPegasusRyderover 1 year agoAuthor

Anonymous - Like too many "Anonymous" you post negative comments on story submissions of others while hiding behind the "Anonymous" tag. You do not get to define how an incestuous relationship or any relationship must be, relationships are unique to those involved in the relationship. If you read the entire series you will see the story is not just about sex between mother and son, it's about a much broader relationship between mother and son that also includes sex between mother and son. You did little more than expose your ignorance. I have studied psychology quite a bit, and have discovered much of psychology is BS when psychology tells others how they must be. Too many psychologists feel simply because they have a degree their personal opinion is more important. There's a difference between personal opinion and professional opinion, too often "professionals" confuse those two things.

Anyone with any experience in the lifestyle understands the difference between cheating, sneaking behind the back of someone who trusts them, and doing the same actions with permission, knowledge, and encouragement. If you read the story, Barbara, Mom, Barbie is a slut, it's her personality, it's who she is. Jay is helping Barbie continue to be who she is and will always be, without her desires destroying her life, and without changing who Barbie is. Rarely can someone change who and what they are, they just learn to control who and what they are in a healthy way without hurting those they care about or hurting those who care about them. You say I am expecting readers to accept "personality changes" in a character I have already developed, but that is not what I am trying to do at all, Barbie keeping the same personality is the premise of the story. Jay is helping Barbie to retain her "personality" who she is, but in ways that she doesn't self-destruct as she did in the past when acting on her own.

I put most chapters in the "Incest" category because the relationship is between mother and son, even if some chapters do not involve sex between the mother and son.

PegasusRyderPegasusRyderover 7 years agoAuthor

Thank you Viatrovic, I used the caps for emphasis in the character's defense about not flashing for money, and since it is fiction nothing personal was intended. Also, with all the chapters finished I feel, or think some of your questions will be answered in future chapters. I probably differ in opinion about how others might judge Barbie to still be the same whore and slut she was before, and when it comes p I will be glad to discuss my opinions.

ViatovicViatovicover 7 years ago
Yep...

Of course, Barbie will always be slutty... my point it's that this exhibitionism it's out of place in her character arc.

She wants to make amends with her son, and while doing it, end in his bed.

This flashing moments are purely selfish, there is not pleasure to give to his son, just for her, for the cheap thrill...

Maybe you think you can use it as a point in her transformation... I was just giving you some kind of warning.

There are points in all story when it can either go wrong or go right, I think this is one of them.

As a writer, you have all the power, I just can tell you if it works or not.

This first seven chapters are great and it would be a shame if it goes to waste.

I love it because I really dig the redemption theme, if at the end Barbara it's the same whore but just gives some pussy to his son, I would be so dissapointed.

Keep the great job and thanks for taking your time to answer.

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