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Click hereWhat the fuck? "Uh ... no?" I answer, quizzically.
"Did you sort the laundry?" she said, a little more directed.
"What are you asking? I don't understand. No, I didn't sort the laundry." I was getting agitated and confused.
"Clean the bathroom? Get the groceries?" She was starting to look exasperated, like I was not getting it.
"I don't know what you mean, NO!"
Mom sighed and held my dick to her pussy. "Could you just do me that favor in the morning?"
Pixie your stories are smoking 🔥. They need follow ups. So please finish this one.
All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love. Mother was so amazing in her seduction process.
pixxie's Mommy Trained Me Well was brilliantly conceived and masterfully written. I couldn't stop reading it.
In my mind, this as a must read for Literotica users who are into mom incest.
☆☆☆☆☆+ (5+)!
I am not in the habit of posting negative comments about peoples creative effort for I am a firm believer that it is easier to criticize than create. However this is not a matter of technical competence. I like build up as much as the next person, I hate stories that just go straight for the sex. But two pages of self indulgent clothing description only to end just when the sex is just about to start is not funny, it's not a tease, it's just lame. If this was the only time I could be a sport about it and say "alright you got me" but when I went to your profile and found ALL your stories were like that, it became clear this was not some mistake to be corrected or a gag, your just trolling.
i stopped reading at the two layers of clothing bullshit. it lost it as a believable story at this point and i lost interest.
It was completely unbelievable and delightfully so. It was caring, delightful. No "real" games or deceitfulness. It was just gentle and nice. Slight coercion towards becoming the desired lover.
I had an ex-gf who used to love the refrain, "Foreplay begins with the dishes." She would go ballistic when I would enter the kitchen. No smudge was safe in her home. Even after a good argument, I was there cleaning making my point that she was more important that the issue.
Alas, at the end of the day, none of this mattered. I wasn't what she wanted to introduce to daddy. So, she's still single as am I. Only now, I know I deserved better in return than what she was offering.
I like your story style and hope you expand in further chapters. Further string out the tension and you will be by far the most intriguing author I read.
The story was very well written, but the ending was a huge disappointment to which I can only expect was part of the plan to begin with as the quality of the writing just dropped the minute she asked her son if he did the dishes... Well done in turning what was, at first, high par erotica into a giant literary troll grin.
The story is flowing. The characters are in place, the setting is good, the excitement high....the ending sucks !!!!