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Click hereOver the weeks and months, our relationship grew romantically. We enjoyed being together intimately. After I graduated, we moved to another state. People at my school and at her work started to get suspicious about how they saw the way we were now acting. My friends, as well as her co-workers, saw big changes in us. We couldn't take the chance of revealing our intimate relationship
By moving to a new state, no one knew that we were mother and son. We walked in public holding hands. Our neighbors could hear us having sex, in which one woman who lived next door to us took a liking to me because she could hear April screaming that she was about ready to cum every time we had sex. I even fucked April in the ass the first week we moved in. It was fantastic, and she told me I could do that to her twice a week.
Seven months into our relationship she shocked me with some news. I was sitting in the living room when she told me she was pregnant. My jaw dropped and eyes bugged out upon hearing the news. I shouldn't have been surprised though. Neither one of us were using any protection, and she was still in her thirties. She sat next to me crying. She was scared and rightfully so. She didn't believe in abortion but she knew she was carrying an incest child. I too was scared, but I would accept whatever decision she made. After some time talking, she decided she was going to have our baby. She said it was our love that made this creation, and it was our love that was going to see this through. I hugged and kissed her accepting her decision.
The next few months was nerve-racking for both of us. Fear and doubt flooded our minds until the day she went into labor. She gave birth to a precious, beautiful baby girl. She named her Christina Marie. When we saw her, we fell instantly in love with her. Our fears subsided when we saw she was a healthy, normal baby.
A few weeks after giving birth to Christina, April had her tubes tied. Now we could have sex all we wanted without the fear of her getting pregnant.
The years flew by so quick. Christina was now growing into a beautiful young lady. April and I couldn't be happier with our little energetic angel. I always told April that I would be the greatest man for her and the best father to our daughter. Her response was "I know, baby. I know."
The end.
This was a really nice story. I am never a huge fan of incest pregnancies but I can see why it was included here. And the fact that she got her tubes tied after was the right choice. To be honest, the mother sounds like the exact idea of the physical type of woman I like. Shorter, round, big breasts, I find all of that very enticing, especially when I was her sons age. Her co-workers and his friends getting suspicious probably only had their suspicions confirmed when they moved to another state. I do wish there could have been a second chapter as we learn about their life after moving (as long as it didn't turn into them each fucking everyone else around, I really dislike when incest stories turn into that). All in all, this was a pretty good story.
Nice story. I really enjoyed reading. I just wonder what happen the other son .. Chris's brother? But I still liked you writing it.
I really liked your story and I'm impressed with how you managed to keep it fresh and original over so many pages.
There were however a few mistakes that could easily have been corrected by a proof reader. For example: They moved to a new state and their friends noticed the change in them.
You might think this next comment is daft, bit I assure you it is true. Reading on a computer/illuminated screen is different to reading a page in a book. Your paragraphs are too long. Try and split them up with a max of 4/5 lines per paragraph. Not only would that aid the pace of your story, it will stop the reader from skipping large sections of your writing.
Hope this helps and feel free to comment on my work.
A little bit long for those of Us that like to get to the point in a hurry.. but did enjoy reading the whole story.. those two have some Amazing energy.. once you get pass the mindset of incest.. Hot is just that.. HOTTT..
I really enjoyed this story. I'm going to read what else you've written. Keep it up. I got off twice from it.
You just made my day. First by giving a great compliment, but second because you proved my point that NOT all who comment as anonymous are immature trolls. You get a thumbs up in my book. Thank you.
First, thanks for the great feedback. I am glad that you enjoyed the story. I'm not criticizing every person who comments as anonymous. Some are very good and give me great advice. It's just those who pick apart the story and complain about this line or that paragraph. Those who have responded got a nerve hit when they read that one part. It got their panties in a bunch. Commenting on that one part of the story proved that. But you and others commented on the entire story. That's what I like. So thanks again for your comment. It made my day.
Loved every word, every sex scene, nicely put together and a fitting end....
To the Anonymous group Own your Critique or don't speak at all....
The general plot was ok but I didn't really find the story erotic. There was very little exploration in to the emotions or feelings driving the characters (very little character development at all in fact for a story of this length) just the facts surrounding the circumstances. It was probably for that reason I found the story to be unnecessarily drawn out with very little to keep me interested. It was kind of like reading a guide to keeping a pet cat that was written by someone who has never owned a cat, I just couldn't find it believable. I am sorry if you've been hurt by insensitive critics but let's face it, you're posting stories on an incest page so it's not really a "safe space" and writing that little rant just made you look like a twat. I was left wandering if you actually came up with the rant first and then tried to construct a narrative around it.
In the beginning, you have the mother (aunt) losing her husband in the same car wreck as the kids parents. Later around page 5, the husband ran off when the kids were little. Which is it? I’m quite confused.
Another moth coming to the flame. Seems to me that part of the story got your attention now didn't it.