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Click hereAfterwards she did her best to wipe herself off. It even looked erotic to me. She was one sexy young woman. We both got dressed and she kissed me while we were still in the barn. "Remember, you must not tell anyone about this. Promise me!"
"I promise!" I said. She walked me to my car and I drove home, one confused soul.
The following week it all became clear. Jenny had been to the doctor the previous week and was a couple of months pregnant. She was going to tell Mark at her party but he didn't come to it. That's when she decided she was going to have sex one time with someone else she cared for.
She chose me and for that I will forever be grateful.
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End of chapter 1
Comments are welcome and appreciated.
DG Hear
- COMMENTS
EMiamiRiverRatalmost 10 years agoAs an author, your are great, perhaps one of the best. The story was good; the ending, however SUCKED! In my opinion, it barely rates a "4".
Pultoyalmost 12 years agoThis is quite good, very interesting, well written and thought through.
You've set the hook now, I am looking forward to spending some time reading the rest of it today.
This episode gets 5***** from me. Thanks for writing.
Regards,
-Pultoy
bruce22almost 12 years agoHope that the rest continues at this level! It is amazing how people get lucky when they are young and only discover it years later. But there are a lot of unlucky folk out there too.
tazz317almost 12 years agoand the remembering brings back bitter-sweet thoughts TK U MLJ LV NV
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoBut I do wish you would get over the short chapters posted apart and just post it all at once.
katibalmost 12 years agoYou are one of the best authors in LIT, and I look forward to reading the chapters that follow.
You might ask Estragon to consider the following:
1. Use "whom" when appropriate, as in "I wasn't sure who I liked being around more," and also "who I got along with." Many other examples of this.
2. And try the subjunctive occasionally, as in your "She told me many times she wished Mark was more like me."
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThis is shaping up to be a good story. just wanted to know about the moral dilemma's that he is facing along with the other characters. Where is Tina's wild side or mary's loving side? Great Story and can't wait to read more
