My New Power

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A new power mysteriously emerges.
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zackson
zackson
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It all started about a year ago, after a car accident that almost ended my life. It was a horrible crash that happened one Thursday afternoon. I should describe myself, I am 19 years old and a freshman in college. I stand 6'3 with black/brown hair and a muscular build. I play football, basketball and baseball in recreational leagues in my hometown in Virginia. So as you can tell I am an average man with a not so average sexual desire. My entire life I have always thought I was a little more, "sexually charged" than most. And my theory was confirmed multiple times through conversations with girlfriends and college buds who said that I had the biggest sexual appetite they had ever heard of! Consisting of jerking off at least three times a day, plus sex at least twice. This large sexual desire has led to many obscure fantasies because I would run out of material for one category pretty quickly. One of these categories was mind control, and it really got me. Mind control turned me on so much more than anything else I had seen. Because of my interest, I went further than ever looking for a way to make my fantasy a reality.

My quest started with google and E-bay searches for devices, pills or techniques to "brainwash" or "control" women. Nothing seemed to be working, and by nothing I mean NOTHING. I spent over $12,000 on devices, pills and mind control classes. Let's just say the trials and results of those expenditures were, less than good. My whole life I haven't been spoiled, per-say, but I had enough so that if I worked hard enough I could almost do anything. So having spent so much time, money and effort on this it made me want it even more.

After all my searching, spending and failing I finally found something worthwhile. A pill that has been proven in multiple lab tests to give the subject, "Mind control capabilities." I immediately looked into it, and got my first bottle of pills from a company called, Mind Control INC. The bottle read, "Take 2 pills twice a day for 3 days, then call the number to get activated."

Activated? What did that mean? What would these pills do to me? I have to say, I was very curious.

So I did as the bottle instructed for the three days, and everything seemed to be going fine! I called the activation number on the bottle and a man with a deep voice answered the phone.

"Hello. Thank you for calling the activation number at Mind Control INC. Please read your activation code to me and we can begin the process" He growled.

"Hi, my code is 137A45F" I recited carefully.

"Very good sir. Please drive to, 10945 serpent's way in one hour to finalize the activation process," he said and ended the call.

At this point I was getting excited. All my work seemed to be coming to a nice close! My deepest sexual desires were soon about to be realized! Or so I thought.

I looked up the address on my phone and found the address was about 15 minutes away from my house. I left so I could get there about 10 minutes early. I got in my car and started on my way! On the way there I had my windows down and music blasting, as happy as can be. Once I turned onto the highway the speed limit jumped from 45 to 75. Looking back, I should have seen this coming from a mile away. Then again, I'm kind of glad I didn't! I looked down to my phone for one second to change the song, and then I heard a loud BOOM in front of me. An 18 wheel oil truck exploded no more the 3 car lengths ahead and the shrapnel was headed right for me! I swerved to the right to avoid the driver side door but ended up driving directly into the rear two tires that shattered the windshield and hit me head on, knocking me immediately unconscious.

I awoke the next day in the hospital to the sound of the nurse's voice.

"His vital signs all look normal. He sure is lucky to not have any permanent injuries from such a horrible crash!" she exclaimed.

"Where am I" I moan.

"O! You're awake! You have been in a car accident but you're OK now honey. You broke a rib, and your left arm" she said.

I immediately noticed how attractive this nurse was. She looked to be 5'9, skinny blonde with at least a DD bust and a beautiful face. Seeing her made me remember my escapade with the mind control pills, and this made me curious to test if they worked! The instructions in the bottle said that to use the mind control you must be looking at the person you wish to control, and think the command you want them to follow. The person being controlled will go into a sort of "obey" mode, and won't remember anything that happens until you stop controlling them. So it's time to test it out!

*Unbutton your shirt and take it off*

She immediately froze in place and started unbuttoning her shirt. Her nails were perfectly manicured with a French tip that looked wonderful against her sky blue shirt. Each button she undid made me more excited. At this point I was completely erect in my bed, standing tall at a sizeable 7". As she got halfway down her shirt I could see her bra. It was a sexy red lace bra that looked to be struggling to contain her huge breasts. The last two buttons were the slowest, almost like she was teasing me. I loved it. I started stroking my dick. She finished with the last one and shrugged the shirt onto the floor. This is great, I need to go further.

*Take off your pants*

Again, maybe quicker than before she started following my command. She started sliding her pants down slowly, teasing me even more. This is too much for me to handle, I am already close to finishing. When she bends down and steps out of her pants I get a very clear view of her huge breasts! I finish right then and there. This was great. Better than I could have hoped! I hear people talking right outside my door and have to hurry. I cover myself back up and give the command.

*Quickly get dressed. Then you are free.*

Just like clockwork she put her clothes on and had gotten dressed in less than 10 seconds.

"I'll go get your doctor to come and check on your injuries! Give me a sec!" she says as she runs out the door.

This is the start of a wonderful adventure.

zackson
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toddster119toddster119almost 6 years ago
Good Start...

I like your story so far, but how come you haven't brought any more installments. Things were just starting to get interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
When are you coming out with MORE?

I know that your guy plays those sports but how?. I know SP forces men who can not play all of those at the same time. It takes allot out of your body playing all of those at the same time. I love your start of a series.

FerrumitzalFerrumitzalalmost 9 years ago

"19 years old and a freshman in college. I stand 6'3 with black/brown hair and a muscular build. I play football, basketball and baseball in recreational leagues in my hometown in Virginia. So as you can tell I am an average man with a not so average sexual desire"

Um, the guy you're describing is anything but average. Being involved in three different sports, even in simple fun leagues, takes a lot of time/energy, and wears heavily on the body. Also, there's only so much time in the week and a lot of those sports run concurrently. Most recreational leagues have performance/attendance requirements to stay on the team.

And how in the world are we supposed to tell that the character has a not-so-average sex drive? You did an info-dump, creating a super-human character, but didn't mention anything about his past. So, there's no way for the reader to know if he has any sexual desires. He could be gay, hetero, bi... there's no telling.

As has been mentioned, he has to report to an address to activate his powers (a really weird idea), but gets into a car accident along the way. So, how does the activation occur?

Potential is there, but.....

ap2techap2techalmost 9 years ago
Confused

He called the number to activate his powers. He had to be there in an hour to complete activation. Huge accident, he winds up in hospital a few days. How were his powers activated if he never made it to the place?

zacksonzacksonalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thnaks for the comments!

This is my first post here on Literotica and I am very happy to see and feedback at all! This is the first part of a series that I plan on updating constantly! If you have anymore suggestions please dont refrain from asking!

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