All Comments on 'My One True Christmas Wish'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing

Cute , readable and erotic

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 4 years ago
I love this story so much!

I've read this story at least a half a dozen times now, and each time through, it reminds me of how much I truly enjoy it! Thank you for sharing it with us!

DeadmanwadeDeadmanwadeover 4 years ago
Amazing

I loved this story. The way their relationship developed and just the sweetness of it. I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Keep up the good work.

MartyMBMartyMBover 3 years ago

One of the very best build-ups I've ever read. More would probably be a kind of like a movie sequel; a bit of a let-down. It would be difficult to keep the same intensity. But I would really like more.

Ed_XEd_Xover 3 years ago
Remarkable

That was hands down the very best story I’ve read on this site in a very long time. I loved everything about. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Well done!

Very well done - thoughtfully structured, and really hot!

CeVin_ChienElleCeVin_ChienElleabout 3 years ago

I am such a sucker for "it all works out" Christmas stories! It looks, loverofFUN, like you haven't been active in a long while, but just in case you still check your comments I want you to know I really enjoyed this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really satisfying romance.

skillmanskillmanover 2 years ago

Loved your story. Fun to read.

ReesertonReesertonover 2 years ago

Reading this again for the third or fifth time. Such a sweet and satisfying love story.

okami1061okami1061about 2 years ago

Anticipation is certainly the second strongest emotion.

It is the essence of Christmas.

Period.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Lovely story.

You wrote this some years ago.

We hope you are well and that your life is full of love just like the two lovely girls in your story.

My GF and i read the story together, all cuddled up, it was very romantic and we took turns to read it out loud. You have given us the start of a lovely evening....which i suspect is going to get even lovlier now!

Thank you for writing it.

MarshallaMarshallaalmost 2 years ago
A slow burn ...

..., this one.

But very well written (a few mistakes), and thoroughly enjoyable.

5 Stars and right into my Favorites List.

My thanks and, please, keep them coming.

Trace_WatersTrace_Watersover 1 year ago

Loved 😍 it! Thanks for sharing your talent. Thoroughly enjoyed. 5 & fav😁

Roti8211Chanai643Roti8211Chanai643over 1 year ago

Great story, is there going to be more of their lives together? Would be great to see where they go as a couple!

Roti8211Chanai643Roti8211Chanai643over 1 year ago

This is a really good story!

Is there more to their story!

Thank you!

UncertainTUncertainT8 months ago

This is one of my favourite stories on Lit, always great to come back to read again.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Perhaps the hottest and best story I have ever read on this site!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Very weak developed antagonist and protagonist. A pleasure to read and feel all the emotions, triumphs and tribulations. Thankyou, it was a pleasure to read and much better quality than those quickie stories. You feel the love and emotions that you expertly express!

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