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Click hereI pull myself out of you and my cum dribbles out of you and runs down your leg. You look so dirty crumpled to the ground -- spent and exhausted. Slowly we pull our shorts and you put your bra back on. With our arms around each others hips we tiredly walk to our belongings. I pull you in, and give you a deep kiss.
"Thanks for the great workout!" You say with a wink, and walk off.
I'm stunned from my experience and watch you walk away, taking in the sight of your tight body and the sway of your ass.
When you're about twenty feet away you look over your shoulder, "Tomorrow then?"
"I'll be here." I say with a smile.
As you walked off the field, any doubts of my move faded away.
- COMMENTS
shadracht8 months agoSecond person is almost never a good idea, unless you're writing it for someone specifically, or unless you're on one of the choose your own style sites (and even then, mixing second person with a first person narrator is just weird, unless it's an audio submission).
Sorry - hard to judge this on the story merits due to that.
