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Click here"Alright then, you asked for it."
With one swift motion Tom pushed Katie onto her back. As if by reflex her legs spread open, giving him full access to her body again. He held himself over her, his monster cock dangling between them. It had yet to reach its full, throbbing potential, but Katie still couldn't remove her eyes from it.
"Its so beautiful," she said in disbelief. You're a work of art."
He smiled, then leaned down and kissed her lovingly.
"Thanks babe," he said as they parted again. "Now shut up and take my cock!"
Katie screamed out again, the now familiar feeling of ecstasy tearing through her body. As she felt her body fill to the brim with Tom's magnificent cock, she knew that she was in for a long, but amazing night.
And she wouldn't have it any other way.
Given the silliness of part 1, I had low expectations for part 2. I was surprised.
Part 2 is even worse than part 1. That took effort. Or something.
You know working with an editor isn't like you'll be holding each other's 13" rock-hard throbbing thesauri. Think of it like the comments here, only more 1-on-1. And your writing would greatly benefit from the 13-in rock-hard throbbing feedback.
He is the kind of arrogant asshole who is the bad guy in most of these stories. Someone needs to show up and cut his nuts off and feed them to him. 3 stars for your effort anyway.
Terrific story-telling, and a good sequel to chapter 1. There is both character development in this chapter and some excellent sex scenes, which are so well-written that they never become boring, nor are they too wordy or repetitive. Five stars.
It's good to be 'Master' of your harem! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
I packed in reading this on page 2 as it had become so repetitive and boring, yes I am aware this is a fantasy but even fantasies have to have a modicum of truth and possibility.