All Comments on 'Not Guilty'
by Harddaysknight
- 815 Comments (Page 9)
Imshakenabout 2 months agoLighthearted almost keystone cops and a very clever story! Thank you for sharing your creation!
cutedaddy69about 2 months agoNice perspective. You write many great stories and, to my taste, some times an average one. This one is definitely among the kinds where your strength lies! Tx
DeanofMeanabout 2 months agoSome say life is a bitch, I don't believe that. Life is a sweet one but her stripper name is KARMA bitch. Well done an almost perfect revenge story
Anonymousabout 2 months agoHoly moly! Ic69hunter likes a story that doesn’t involve a cum slurping cuckold.
Southdownabout 1 month agoA bit messy and jumbled at times, but well pulled together in the end. You need to be simpler and not try to'jam in' all the information you want to convey at one time This was a fun read but could have been a 5***** epic with a little editing or 'tidying up' Thank You I love twisted plots and interconnecting stories but they have to be clear and well punctuated. take a little time and get a read-through before you publish,,,, Well Done good story!
Captain_Karmaabout 1 month agoWell done! I love these Detective Cook stories. I hope you get offers from Hollywood.we need more detective comedies. All of your work is fantastic! Thanks
MAJESTY21015 days agoExcellent I would have liked to have had more sex in it but overall this story was fantastic. One of the best I’ve ever read.
Anonymous13 days ago5 Stars from GW on this one Yes I did nail my wires boy toy girlfriend while he was nailing my soon to be ex . I came out way ahead on that deal
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