- Loving Wives
- Oh...Sarahhh
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Click here"Yes. And then eat him from me."
"I won't," he promised as he stormed out.
Two days later, after a two hour football practice, Bruno arrived home with Gary in tow.
"Hi hon, this is the boy I've been telling you about. I thought he might join us for dinner, discuss his marks and everything. Gary, Gary Stewart."
"Hello Mrs. Fisher," the handsome, dark haired teen arrogantly spat out, his eyes jumping from my face to my chest to my groin. He'd recognized me for what I was immediately.
I knew he'd fit perfectly...fill me...make me come...and come...I wondered if Bruno would end up watching us...
...then wondered how fat the Polish bakers' sausage was...
...wondered if the cute cop would just bend me over his cruiser and...
...wondered how the president would ever get that fat knob into me...
I know I'll soon find out.
THE END
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Let me know if you'd like to hear about Sarahh'hs further adventures. Thanks, Jim S.
- COMMENTS
Madeira1076about 1 month agoLove your other stuff, just cuck stories are kinda gross for me.
Wish you were still writing here, I love your other stories! I didn't vote.
Lonestar27over 4 years agoI would love to see a continuance to this story with the same characters!!
highshine808almost 5 years agowhat a lovely little slut
so willingly compliant
so fully empowered
26thNCover 5 years agoThis type story is not for.me. Author seems.to have some talent, but it is wasted.here.
scouriesover 6 years agoAuthorYou'r a pretty tough scorer my friend!!!
However the good news for me is that even with all its faults you did choose to read the whole story. Which is all an author can ask. Hopefully you moved on to some other of my tales and you found some of them more to your taste...
Jim (a.k.a. Scouries)
Anonymousover 6 years ago- Minus one star for husband being a cuckold, even a knowing one who performs cleanup duties. Gross!
- Minus one star for yet another woman becoming a whore out of the blue and having an unrealistic personality change.
- Story left very much unfinished earns another loss of one star.
- You still treat the sex scenes like an inconvenient afterthought in a story that's so heavily involved with sex so minus one more.
- I still managed to read it all the way through so a reluctant plus one star.
Total value of 2 stars.
Anonymousabout 7 years agobecause in real life she would be in jail. the kid would be expelled and seeking councilling.
Anonymousover 7 years agoIt's a shame this ends with the "I wondered..." scenario. Please follow this up with following chapters.
bworth1943over 7 years agoterrible story. totally not believable. For many years TV sitcoms to this day portray the father and husband a fool. Many authors portray them as not only fools but willing cucks as well. Guess what ? Many wifes are murdered and also children, when a husband finds out his wife believes he is a cuck fool, And he has no reason to go on . The result ? murder suicide. Extreme ? yes. more believable than this story ? Yes
Anonymousover 7 years agoMore garbage from the cuck wimp writer.... Closet fag showing his true self with this shit story.....
Robin422over 7 years agoThank you for the story, it's left me wanting more & more. Would love to hear Sarah's ongoing adventures.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoBruno takes one look at that kid and refuses to allow his name to be put on the birth certificate. It wouldn't have taken him very long to file for divorce and throw her cheating ass out. All he needed to do to retain most of the assets and not pay alimony or child support was to threaten to tell and then tell her friends and family whose baby it was. This has to be one of your worst stories. It simply made no sense. Bruno divorces her and she's left to her own devices. What other possibility was there? Just plain bad.
pwagroabout 9 years agoSorry, Scouries,
I felt like I was reading someone else's writing with this one. I agree with another commenter that the characters were shallow & stereotyped. Not your usual believable, everyday people living in both normal & highly erotic situations.
Most of your stories are exceptionally well written with erotically realistic storylines, but in comparison, I felt let down by this one even thought it had a storyline with an interesting, but unachieved potential. Hopefully, the next of yours that I read will be up to your usual standards.
Sincerely,
pwagro
spinner45over 9 years agoAll of the characters in the story are shallow. The only character who is slightly attractive is the wife, but her total surrender to her "slave" self makes her ultimately a loser. The husband is absolutely a disgusting wimp.
I'm sorry I bothered to read it.
Anonymousover 9 years agowrite what you know. Since this author writes about losers, I guess that explains what kind of a guy this author is.
Anonymousover 9 years agoyou most definately have to write a sequel. if only one more chapter. please!we have to know if sarah has a daughter to go with her son.
diegotoadstickerabout 10 years agoBy the time I got 3/4 down the first page of this, I couldn't have conceived of a more loser husband. You spent way too much effort making him a loser with a crap attitude instead of just a regular guy who had a wife who simply wanted to cheat.
