Once Upon an Elf

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A sexy fairytale adventure with an Elf.
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Rarans
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All the characters in this story are above 18 years of age. This is my first story in the category so forgive any mistakes.

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Once upon a time in a large forest there lived an elf brother and sister called Evan and Evelin. They lived in their little bamboo cottage by stream. They took care of each other as they had no one else to take care of them. Evan used hunt small animal while Evelin searched for fruits and nuts.

Near their cottage there lived an ugly evil witch who wanted be beautiful. She became jealous of the beauty of Evelin, who is indeed very beautiful, and kidnapped her.

Evan knowing of the wickedness of the witch went straight to her lair and demanded the witch so release his sister.

The witch said "Evan, I have heard a great many stories of your bravery and skill. I have a small task on the completion of which your sister shall be released safe other wise I will kill her."

"What is this task that you require of me?" Evan asked.

"I need you to find ingredients for my potion of ever lasting beauty."

"What are they?" He asked.

On this question she took out a piece of parchment and gave it to him.

"This is the list of ingredients which are required for the potion. I must have them before winter solstice which is in ten days other wise you know the price."

He slipped the parchment into his pocket and went into the forest to get the ingredients.

He opened the parchment and saw its contents. They ingredients were:

The blood of a Chimera

The bone of a Giant

The semen of a Minotaur

Little did he know that there was a fourth ingredient not revealed by the witch which was the beating heart of a female elf.

He set of in the direction of woods of monsters where a Chimera lived.

He stopped to rest on the bank of a river. He heard the sounds of a hoofs of a horse. He turned to see what was making the noise. He saw a black unicorn carrying a human female who appeared to be very weak.

She swooned and fell from her steed to the ground. The unicorn turned and ran into the forest.

Evan immediately reached her took her to river made her drink some water. She slowly came to consciousness. She was beautiful in her way, not the tender grace of Evelin, but the wild kind of beauty.

She had those blue eyes, dark chestnut hair and lithe body of a hunter.

She stood up and introduced herself as Mona. She asked him what is doing in this part of forest.

Her recounted his story and showed her the parchment.

"Then definitely I must accompany you on this task."

"But it is too dangerous,"

"It is the danger involved that makes me want to help you."

Thus agreed, they proceeded in search of Chimera. It did not take long because Chimera found them and attacked seeing prospective dinner.

They fought ferociously for some time striking, stabbing, parrying and dodging till Evan gave the final blow to it. It fell to the ground and Evan filled it's blood into a Vail.

The travelled next to the grave yard of giants in the mountains overcoming a lot of difficulties. The dug out a grave and took some bones .Evan put them into a bag .

They camped outside grave yard that night. It is a truly spooky place. Is was cold.

"Mona, thank you for being with me all this."

"Its' nothing Evan." said Mona climbing into his lap for warmth.

He kissed her on a sudden impulse and she kissed back. The cuddled each other for a long time.

Evan couldn't control himself, he tore the robes of mona and thrust his cock into her pussy .She moaned with pleasure.

"Evan fuck me harder."

"Uh uh uh"

"Mmmm..."

"I love you "

"I love you too"

And then he came.

They still had the last ingredient to collect. But this journey was a pleasure, they fucked every night as they travelled to Minotaur's lair.

I was a large cave full of human bones. The entered the cave. The Minotaur was sleeping on a bed of straw.

Evan said "how can we get its semen?''

"Leave it to me." said Mona.

"What are you planning to do?"

"You'll see"

"No, please don't."

"I'll do anything for you Evan.''

She walked towards the monster took his cock and put it in her mouth and started sucking it.

The Minotaur moaned loudly in his sleep. She sucked harder and harder. The cave shook with Minotaur's moans.

Then he came, he shot spasm after spasm into her mouth. It seemed a wonder that she held all of it in her mouth.

She removed her mouth and spat all of it into a flask. She was about to return when the Minotaur woke up.

He grabbed her by her waist pulled her. She tried to resist but couldn't. She threw the flask to Evan which he caught.

"Evan go and free your sister."

"I can't leave you here."

"Yes, you can" she cried as the monster ravaged her. He pulled her deeper and deeper into the cave until he heard her cries no longer.

Having no choice he left and went to the home of the witch and gave her the ingredients.

"Now leave my sister."

"I have one small job with her and then I will leave her."

Evan tried to unsheathe his sword, but she tied him with one swing of her wand.

He watched helplessly as the witch took out a knife to cut his sister's heart. The moment the blade touched Evelin's skin the witch fell dead.

"What can you do without me?" Said Maya.

And they lived happily ever after.

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Leety777Leety777almost 8 years ago
Well

This could have been a great story. The elements are there but you chose to skim over the possible good parts to make this a complete story.

1. The quest could have been and should have been more descriptive

2. The sex. Could have used more of that and built up the relationship as they went on the quest together to get all the ingredients.

3. Character names. You could have been more diligent in your editing. Maya? Who is that? How is it possible for her to kill the witch? If it is Mona, how did she get away from Minotaur? And why did you leave us hanging on him getting busy with her?

Again, good base story but you could have told it better. I feel ripped off.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Grammer failed. Story failed. Time wasted. Conclusion 1 star is 1 too many.

Learn English or get a editor.

Otherwise stop typing please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
What?

I'm just really confused. Who's Maya? Did she kill the witch? Or was it the sister? Way too rushed TBH

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Poor ending

All that buildup in the ending didn't really make any sense

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
name change?

did mona become maya?

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