Paying It Backward

Loved it! Loved how it was the subs decided how far it goes. Trust between the Dom and sub is huge. The sub has to know the safe word will be respected. That the Dom will only push the very edge of the line and the stop. And the Dom has to provide excellent aftercare. It is a whole package. It is beautiful as a Dom and it is beautiful as a sub.

No. No. No. I would never have taken the mother and daughter back in. Fuck that noise. Let them live on the streets. I don't care. They made their life choices, let them live with the consequences.

I am sensing a hidden story. Like the sister was the true dom. When everything fell apart, it was the isiter the fiancé turned to. During the recorded event in the deck, everyone but the sister was involved, like she was orgastrating it. At every turn, it was the sister taking initiative. When she wormed her way back into her brothers life, it was her instructing him how to be a dom. Almost like she was showing him how she liked it.. No, not submissive at all

Additionally, the part of the brother turning from anger to giving assylum to his Mom and sister is not explored. He went from hating them the giving shelter. Why? True unbroken family ties? It was not adequately explored

Got to agree with other comments. First of all, the strong independent "I'm getting out of here before he retaliates" sister from the start of the story doesnt fit with the over the top submissive sister later in the story. Surely if she was truly that submissive, she'd never have threaten to leave without her master's permission. Second, Mike makes a complete U-turn throughout the story. He starts as emotionally outraged at his family's betrayal, then becomes morally outraged at how his father has been treating his mother and sister, but then he just folds into an abusive piece of shit that takes advantage of them. With ties into the last issue of the story. Ellie is clearly just a whore, her character and actions are consistent, but Mike's mother and sister are quite clearly abuse victims. I have no doubt his mother has always been somewhat submissive, otherwise her husband would never have been able to push her so far past her limita that she lost her entire identity outside being a sex slave. Mike sister however was clearly groomed from a young age by an abusive sadistic father, and a sex slave mother into becoming her father's fuck toy. It's not natural, and it certainly isn't consential when it starts at such a young age that you can comprehend what your being groomed for. And then there's Mike. Given his reaction at the start of the book, and his clear when he found out the truth about his father, his character was perfect to be the hero that saves his family. It's an incest story, so family sex is a foregone conclusion, but he should and could have done it in a loving way. Slowly showing his sister that her self worth is more than just being a sex toy, eventually falling into a consential and loving relationship of equals while helping his mother by pulling her back from the edge by being a kind and loving dom. Instead he just folds, throws his own morals and ethics aside and becomes just as cruel and heartless abuser as his father, his only redeeming feature beingnthat his seems to actually love his family and that he hasnt set up his own son up to marry a whore. Sadly, given his change in attitude, I see nothing that says that he wouldnt be doing just that in 20 years after he has his own children.

Okay, I’ve read some of the other comments and my dislike of this story is the feeling that the story changed in the middle somewhere. In the first part of the story the wife tells her son she is staying in Nebraska, which seems to indicate she made the decision, then she tells her husband, the primary abuser not to blame her. Next we have the daughter marching to her room stating she is leaving without asking for permission from the supposedly controlling father. None of this behavior aligns with the simpering sister that shows up on her brother’s doorstep. It just feels like Doc started out in one direction and couldn’t make it work out, so the story changed in midstream. While I had high hopes for Mike ending up with his mom and sister, preferably with dad in the grave, the whole ultra submissive attitude didn’t do anything for me. Oh, and licking someone’s ass after a bowel movement should require a special warning, lol and ewww.