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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Ass fuck

What's with no ass fuck, y'all? I want to see this little lady air tight! Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I would have to say...

I would have to say well written. The beginning has a nice hook and as always your body is well formed and perfectly conditioned with sexy scenes that pull the mind into the situation like watching a movie. I must disagree with whoever wrote that you should have put a double penetration scene in. You've written many stories that include many different sexual situations, and it would be difficult for me to suspend my disbelief if every story you wrote had one particular sexual act over and over again, especially one with which most women are not comfortable with.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Should have

You should have had her do a DP that would be what I would charge.

jaqvertjaqvertover 12 years ago
a fun quick read

light hearted reading, I didnt mind it all. Nice twist at the end.

FISHINGDUDEFISHINGDUDEover 16 years ago
Fun for all!

Nicely written story,enjoyable.Will be reading more of your work,Steve

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