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Click hereIf they were to succeed the sexual communion must begin as soon as possible, immediately. He waited for Ishtral's answer. He felt that much time had passed since he had asked, but time had stilled for him while his thoughts filled him. Whatever may occur the magic must be begun as soon as possible or it would be too late!
To be continued in Princil's Magic Chapter 2
All sounds good to start with ... looking forward to much more magic :)
The low rating is probably down to heavy infodumping, and a stilted old timey mode of speech, which is just not a popular choice or what most readers are used to.
The plot is a bit sudden but it is not a bad plot for a first chapter.