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Click here"Consider it a gift for those of us who can," Maura said. Climbing onto the bed, she added, "Now then, let me at that!"
"Oh God, Maura!" She had him gasping for joyful breath again in no time with her well-practiced strokes, and she could feel herself growing delightfully wet at his tender-beyond-his-years touch. "It is a gift, isn't it?"
"Something you can enjoy all year if you'll let it," she whispered in a reassuring tone, and with a slow, loving touch, she guided him inside her once again.
Then it wasn't at the end. 2 stars for the total loss...
I wound up loving this story! You made the backstory interesting and weaved in enough suspense about what was to come to keep me reading to the end. The only thing I would suggest is a more graphic description of the couplings, to please the "wham bam" readers.
Reads like it was free writing for a college creative writing class. Just too wordy.
This anonymous thoroughly enjoyed a well written story. The fact that the sentences were apparently too long is irrelevant.
I will follow advice and look out your other work.
A damn good read!
Your story was well told, well written and enjoyable.
To the other 'Anonymouses' - if all you have to do is count words, instead of reading content, then I suggest you go away and play Scrabble. Or produce well written erotica of your own. If, of course, you are able to write.
I love your stories and style. Grand Island and the sequel are two of my favorites. Thanks for sharing.