All Comments on 'Pushing Boundaries'

loved it

OMG!! The best ever game of strip poker along with a secret relationship and a fantasy that became reality.

Great Story!! I love the writing because it felt like the true feelings of college life and those views of possible realities. For me and my middle age POV I thought Malena would be Austin’s true match as a friend, lover and partner. He has certainly programmed himself to obsess and pursue Alanna and loyalty to himself (and how hot and open she us) would require hime to ride that out, but she has needs to explore more than any of the others - and she knows that. In my mind this explains her wanting to keep Austin’s true match (Malena) in the mix. Your descriptions of Malena were so incredible and I think this story could have easily derailed into a true romance on the picnic table in the rain behind the house. Malena was ready to play for keeps. That’s how good this writing is. Love it thank you

I might have commented on this story before, perhaps anonymously..

I love that this story is unashamedly both loving and erotic.

I would also turn the volume up to eleven.

Great story, really well done.

Great story. A bit on the long side. I love a good orgy scene. What I liked most is that Austin and Alanna as new as their relationship is are able to share without recrimination or jealousy. That is probably due to their life long friendship, but it means that they will be able to have so much sexy fun going forward without doubt.

This was your first story, and despite my love of the AMA series, it's still my favorite work of yours. I look forward to the return of Alanna, Austin, and Melena in long form.

Austin takes Alanna into the City for a special event. They leave, sit on a park bench and he's so horny a cop sees his hard on and tells them to move on. They go home to Austin's room. Alanna blindfolds him. Then the story ends.

I wanted her to tie him to the bed and maybe straddle his face and rub him all the while his cock aching to be touched. And finally at llong last Alanna would turn around. Put desensitzer in his condom to make him last. And make him work and work to reach his orgasm. She had hers and she loved to play with his arousal and resoponse. He tries to drive himself but tied down he can't do much. Finally, she tightens down on him and just as he is totally exhausted he comes. Thats what I was hoping for.

A clever and inventive piece of fictional writing, as most others commenters have said. Possibly a bit on the long side. Are US college students really so gratuitously promiscuous, though? Perhaps they are.....

I definitely enjoyed this story, and all of the girl-girl action was really hot and exciting, but why are the guys left out? Why not let Austin feel a hard cock for the first time either in his mouth or his ass. Maybe Alana could fuck him with her strap-on. I've never understood why girl-girl contact in an otherwise hetero setting is common p!ace, but boy-boy sex is ignored. Boys and men should open their sexual boundaries as well as girls and women.

It was interesting the anticipation when the game was going, the build-up and the writing wasn't so predictable. Alanna and Austin relationship could be explored maybe from the beginning(just an idea// for novela series) if you're upto it and it could be turn into something more beautiful, far more erotic story with ups and down they might face in their relationship(the 3 way, maybe Alanna falling for someone else, the pain, falling out of their relationship and more). Btw great story. Keep up the good work

I can't wait to read more about them, awesome story! Really enjoying your other work too, thank you :)

i would have liked for him to trust her with Josh. maybe not sex since it was new to her but at least, let her give him a blowjob or get eaten out by him. the rest...great but that insecurity was a bit odd

What a brillant fantasy (I can’t imagine many student houses having quite this sort of fuck-fest) but superbly written, both the overall variety and in terms of the quality of language used. Well done!

LOVED the consent, communication, bodily variety, joy, cosiness, friendship, delay in satisfaction, mutual admiration, etc. Finally, a carefree fap - no mental gymnastics to justify terrible age gaps or behaviours (yeah yes, hygiene aside, but that'd have taken all the wind out of this story AND you actually mentioned this!).

You made it so easy to step into their realm, great descriptions. I'd love to read more of your work

By page 3 I had to share this with a friend. I normally don't share porn. But your story just reminded me so much of our group. Well done

Like you said, a little long. Too much thinking about what could go wrong. Other than that, a GREAT story. You have amazing talent. All this is just my uneducated option. Keep writing.