Quiet

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He gently presses into her a few more times before leaning down to kiss her. They gaze at each other, amazed. Her hands move over his back in a soothing manner. She brings one hand up to cup his cheek, and they kiss again.

After taking a moment to catch his breath, he stirs as if to move from lying on her. She holds him to her, craving the closeness.

"Please, just stay here with me."

"I'm not too heavy?"

"No, no you're not." She draws her hand along the side of his face, watching his green eyes.

Without releasing her, he rolls to one side. "Yes, I am. It doesn't mean that we can't hold each other though."

They lay together in the dim light, learning the language of touch. Finally, she tucks her head under his chin, falling asleep to the sound of his gentle breathing.

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ChopinesqueChopinesqueover 1 year ago

Gifted writing, so sweetly feminine in spirit, in its essence.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Really great description, and the "feedback" from her was wonderful to read

mimastermimasterover 13 years ago
Ahh...redheads!

I felt compelled to re-read your stories, Anna...starting with this one. I love how she lets him do as he wishes at first, yet is filled with such passion that she has to break free to give back what he's giving her. And I love that you leave us guessing. Who are they? What was the wager? Did she deliberately lose? The questions make us want more...and yet, it's so perfect. Your writing is elegant. Thank you for sharing your gift!

PennLadyPennLadyalmost 14 years ago
well done

and very sexy. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Awesome!

Very sexy! Love the title and the whole blindfolding aspect, it's awesome! Can't wait to read your next submission!

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