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Click hereFinally, after enough of the slow build up, she cannot take any more of the gradual climb, she wants to get to the top, and she wants to get there now. Her fingers suddenly go wild, changing the circles to an accelerated back and forth vibration, her chest heaves and her voice whimpers a weak protest, “no, mmmm, no….” followed by a shallow and insincere cry for help, “oh god….. help me,” as her clit and cunt begin to pulsate around her fingers and her whimpers become a cry out loud and her head rolls from side to side on her forearm, pressing her face, her eyes, into her arm and then her hand holds onto her face, twisted in ecstasy.
The cries become whimpers again as she begins a slow cascade back down, until two fingers apply one last concentrated effort, pressing on the clit firmly for one more mini-climax that releases all of the energies that had built up from the first touch.
I turn to let the shower hit my face, eyes closed, hands on hips, then my head falls down towards the ground for one last deep breath before my body begins to recover its location in space and time. Eyes open, I smile, it is good to be Mary this morning. It would be even better to be with her tonight...
jesus H. Are you me? I've lived it, every word, but I don't think I could write it as well.
amazingly well done.
I admire your expressive style. I find myself thinking if I could only impress you as strongly as this Mary. I'm jumping from the story character to the author personally. In all the stories I've read this is the first time this has happened.
I look forward to reading more.
Thank you.
Clever interweaving of sexual and religious motifs - powerful stuff, very like (sorry if this sounds pretentious) film maker Luis Bunuel. The whole thing is paced very well - like the slow build-up of the relationship. Horny as hell without the usual cliched blow-by-blow and so unarousing description of climax after climax. It had a beginning, middle and end - and I hope there will be more. Thanks.