All Comments on 'Retribution, a Different Take'

The 1sst version was bad...this one was terrrible.

Don't give up your day job, Scorpio.

First one is much better, you should've stick on the threesome part on this one

Both stories are great! I like this one slightly more in terms of intricateness of the plot. While the first one has a higher BTB score; this one also has revenge on the assholes as well so it wins.

I liked both but the first was better by far.

5/5

First one was ten x better.

The first one was better. This is just stupid.

Both are garbage

I liked the first one better.

I didn't finish it so I don't know what happened. I quit reading when the star of the show blackmails two women into having sex with him and showing he is even lower than the lawyer who was blackmailing his wife. There should be one likable character in a story.

Both stories are good but the first one was better.

Way too complicated and highly implausible. First version is equally implausible (how many who are reading this could arrange to sell their unfaithful wives to a Central American whorehouse on a week or less notice?). But the first version at least is simpler and definitely qualifies for BTB retribution, even if it is totally over-the-top and would very likely result in his being arrested, charged, convicted and sentenced to at least double digit prison time.

Pathetic

I knew this shithole could not write…but know now that he can’t even multiply!! Did he wash out from class 1 ? Does he work as a shot hauler as his day job? Could be…

For example…see this dialogue

‘ That's twelve hundred a fuck. Figuring once a week for over a year that's at least sixty fucks. Each one was worth twelve hundred dollars. My head tells me he owes you eighty-four hundred dollars. I'm just asking did he pay, and if he did, where's the money?

Seriously? 1200 x 60 = 8400??

Really ,really, really a stinking steaming pile of poo. Some of the worst on this site.

Wow! How did you piss off so many idiots? I liked your story, would have loved it if it had more retribution. He was way too easy on the whores.

A tattoo that both women had covered and a divorce isn't much retribution. Especially after waiting so long. Should have dumped the bitch at the rest area on the way home. DMW aka

How very Andrew Tate of you

This story is worse then Argentina's inflation.

This is better than the first story.

Egads. What a fruitcake story of retribution. Do people really get off on this tripe? Not to mention which prestigious criminal lawyer is going to play the insurance fraud card to blackmail a married woman for sex in an accident that caused $3600 in damages. Worse the MC cannot do basic math. 60 times @ $1200 per tryst is somehow $8400? And yet this Brainiac pulls off all this drawn out retribution? Whatever.

This one sucked just like the first take.