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Click hereI went on and did fine in school, got a good job, and eventually married. My wife is a very attractive, slender blonde. With my encouragement, I've gotten her to grow her hair long. Even now, eight years after Michelle dumped me, when my wife is giving me a blowjob or I'm fucking her from behind, the way I get off—what sends me over the edge—is remembering, visualizing, Michelle. I wonder if I'll ever get over her.
Loved it! It was hot and had me completely hooked. I loved the ending. I understand Michelle, feel bad for what she does to others and that she feels like she had to do that for her own happiness, but it makes perfect sense. I am a masculine gay male and have never had any interest in dressing as a female or being more feminine, but I loved going down on my straight friends in college, including my roommates.
great writing, great usage of words and scenery. i wouldt not have said bye to michelle
Great writing skill. Wasted. Disgusting ending. 1 (you don’t even deserve that) for being so fucked up and evil-hearted. Ignorant and bullying.
well written. His feelings were so well expressed in your writing that it hurt to discover the ending. Great writing.
Great story....until the end! I know, not all romances end happily! Oh, the author did make it seem like a romance albeit part time when Michelle decided she wanted it. But this was not a romance once Michelle explained why she only gave 6 month leases. She used men for her sadistic pleasure, only to break countless hearts. People like Michael/Michelle are going to live a lonely miserable life. Michelle sounds sweet, hope she gets over her self-centeredness!
The ending was unexpected and not what was expected. I was floored because recently had a friend tell me about his female side - an emotional twin to Michelle, I thought she was coming onto me and we did not have sex, but the talk was very intimate.
I feel closer to her (but not to him, we don't do much together after she told me) and she thinks of me as a close friend but not a lover.
I will say the story made me cry a little and also understand her more, thank you
This was very unexpected. Not only very hot, but so well written! You have talent
You did a nice job of building up the relationship between the narrator and Michael/Michelle. And I was crushed when s/he gave him the air.
Oh, and very horny too.
Thanks.
I never rate or comment, which I guess reflects porly on me, but this was a powerful STORY, and very well written. I think I only noticed one error which is so rare in these times. Really well done, thank you.