- NonHuman
- Rose Ch. 06-10
- Page 4
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I stood up and looked over the Alphas. "The killer we are after is highly trained and intelligent; he has managed thus far to make multiple kills while leaving behind little evidence. He has used ammonia and black pepper to hide or mask his scent. At this point, we have no leads and no clue as to his motivation. That is where you come in," I said.
"We need to compile a list of potential suspects," Gunny said. "Anyone, human or werewolf, who has threatened your Pack or expressed hostility towards your members. We are especially interesting in people with shooting skills; hunting, prior military. Cast a wide net, and report if there is any doubt."
"Why tell you," one of the Alphas said. "Why not take care of it ourselves?"
"Because it's likely a human, and he's not on our territory when he's doing this," I said. "The FBI has jurisdiction here, we have full access to their resources. We will lose that if we don't allow the process to work, including the human justice system."
"You'll have all the resources you need," Alpha Derek Johnson said as he took the floor. "A jet has been placed at your disposal, along with crew. You are being granted access to any Pack lands, and each of us will assist with anything you need." He looked right at me. "Just find this fucker before more people are killed."
"We'll do our best, Alpha."
I just didn't know if that would be enough.
- COMMENTS
skippersdadover 2 years agoI was wondering about the panther sex, I knew male cats had burs in there meat and was curious about how you going to do the panther sex now I know.
abiostudent3over 4 years agoHang on a sec, you're breaking canon again.
The line about how they burned their dead during the war to hide them, but now that it's over the families can choose to bury them...
That directly contradicts everything you've said about burning the dead before - that is, that if they aren't burnt, their spirit doesn't go back to Luna for reincarnation. That's been mentioned in pretty much every serial so far, and used in specific to prevent bad wolves from reincarnation.
I've been reading chronologically from the beginning up through here over the past few days, and while your writing is very good, and quite engaging, there are a number of little incongruities like that which are jarring and pull the reader out of the story.
Still, keep up the work, I'm massively impressed by the volume you have produced. (Speaking of which, think you could update your profile with the order to read the latest few series in? I've been assuming they come later just because they're newer, but...)
tishangelover 6 years agoI love a good murder/mystery and this one is right up there with a good old fashion Sherlock Holmes story. Great writing and great characters. Can't wait for the next installment.
partwolfover 6 years agoAuthorThe packs and their boundaries are public; they have been granted a legal status similar to that of Native Americans. There also also some going out and seducing humans, even pretending they are mates. Whether he was targeted or she just took one back to kill him, we don’t know.
