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Click hereMandy launched herself down on Mike's cock and he groaned loudly with the sudden assault. She picked up speed and she was frantically driving herself up and down as she flailed on his hips. Mike grabbed her hips to aid her efforts, pushing up as she lifted with her legs and pulling her down hard as she relied solely on gravity."
Mike felt it building from a light pressure to a cock crushing grip as her anal orgasm came rolling over her. She was screaming loudly. Mike prayed the cops wouldn't come. Her sphincter was clenching with an incredible pressure. Her heat was boiling the blood in his shaft.
Mandy screamed, "AAAHHHH...AAAHHHH," with each clench. I was groaning, "OOOHHH FFFUUUCCKKK," with each clench. Through it all Mandy kept right on butt-fucking my steel shaft. "JEEESSSUUUSSS CHHHHRRRIIISSST," I yelled.
That was it for me. I exploded cum into her bowels. Mandy screamed as my cock grew larger and the first stream blew into her. Her hands pushed mine away and she grabbed her nipples and began pinching them very hard. She knew what she wanted and she literally took it into her own hands.
As my many streams of cum subsided and her sphincter stopped clamping, Mandy collapsed forward onto my chest. I threw my arms around her shoulders and held her tight. Neither one of us had taken a breath as every muscle in our bodies remained clenched in knots. Finally, Mandy gasped to inhale a breath and I followed soon after. The tip of my cock was still buried in Mandy's ass. She had pulled herself off most of it when she collapsed forward.
In a playful mood, Mandy started manually clamping her sphincter on the head of my cock. I teased her right back by manually making my cock dance around under her. She giggled into my chest.
They were both quiet for some time enjoying their embrace. After nearly ten minutes, Mandy lifted herself up to extract Mike's cock. She lay down beside him and nestled into his side and laid her head on his shoulder. He pulled her in close with his arm and caressed her ear and face. She moaned from his light touch. She had one hand on his chest twirling her fingers in the hair. She noted that his chest hair was not excessive. She liked some hair on a man's chest but not too much.
Mandy said, "Mike. I think it goes without saying that I would like to see where we are going with this. I think you feel the same way. Should we take it slow because this has been anything but slow? Wow."
Mike thought for several moments and replied, "I don't know about you but I've kind of loved the fast part, but I know what you mean. How about dinner tomorrow night? Just you and me?"
She replied, "Well. I loved the fast part tonight too. I want to see if there is more for us than just sex, which is fantastic, by the way. I have never felt like I felt with you tonight. Dinner tomorrow night would be great. I would love to cook for you."
Mike kissed her forehead and said, "That would be great. How about 7:00?"
With plans made they fell into a deep sleep still entwined with each other. They woke after the sun came up still in the same position accept Mandy's hand had at some point encircled Mike's flaccid cock. She kissed him on his nipple and he kissed her forehead. She lifted her head up and they kissed passionately on the lips.
Stay tuned for an obvious continuation of this story in Chapter 5 (not written yet)...
- COMMENTS
ereaderlover 1 year agoI wish I could give two ratings. One for how hot it is (a resounding 5), the other for how well written,
which has to be a 3. The shift from first to third person can be ok with a ~~~ or something, but you would switch back and forth in the same paragraph. Please get a proof reader, thigs like "she" that clearly should be "he" .
I know some writers ask not to be rated on their language, but that is what makes the difference between good writing and great writing. When there are so many trips/ tumbles in the writing, the story doesn't flow as smoothly and detracts considerably.
On to other thoughts, I see some comments criticizing Nicky going after Mike, but I think that was a great segue to get him involved. He needed to get his shell cracked, or he was never going to be ready for Mandy. Nice work.
I look forward to reading on.
Anonymousover 3 years agoThis was a much better chapter than the last one. Although I'm not happy with Nicky cheating. She demanded honesty but isn't honest with him.
Tossawayabout 8 years agoI DO NOT CRITICIZE NEGATIVELY IN PUBLIC, I will send a private email with my criticisms.
I like your story ideas a lot & have a few suggestions for you! 5*
Anonymousover 8 years agoI do feel other readers are being a bit hard on Nicki. Zach did get the ball rolling by banging her mother. He's not some doe eyed victim.
Jonny_Bluelineover 8 years agoThe gist of the story is good, but you need to have someone proofread and correct the tenses and shifts from third person to first person. The last page is particularly bad for this problem.
