- BDSM
- Servicing the Debt
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"MY GOD!" I screamed out in a gurgle, my mouth full of Gina's delicious pie, as I realized that they were finally going to allow me to have an orgasm and like a wet dream come true, with ALL of them at once. Now it appeared my luck had FINALLY turned as this was the ultimate of all ultimate experiences. Within minutes I shot load after hot load of cum deep up into Victoria as my aching balls sighed in relief as they mercifully emptied. It felt like I had released a gallon of spunk when all of a sudden all of the girls leapt off of me.
"What! What is the matter!" I asked innocently, desperate to have this dream continue.
"Oh, that's going cost you!" Victoria said mischievously as she looked over at Gina and Samantha and winked. "Hmmm, normally I won't let a guy do that until he has taken me out to a nice restaurant and we have seen a good Broadway show or something."
Gina, now understanding Victoria's plan said "You are right. I think you have been had. How much would a date like that cost normally?"
Samantha, already laughing at the situation added "About 120 dollars for the dinner and 200 for good seats at a decent show."
Gina, interrupting said "Yeah, and normally the guy would buy you some sort of token of his affection right?"
Victoria nodded in agreement. "Well" continued Gina "That would be another 100 dollars easy."
Victoria, now with an evil glint in her eyes stared down into my desperate eyes and said "I guess you are back in hock with us again! Let's see 120 for dinner plus 200 for the show and 100 for the gift will be 420 dollars."
Samantha broke in and said "Boy that number seems strangely familiar. Hmmm, $420 at 7 dollars a day will be..."
"OH NO!" I screamed as I did the math in my head "NOT ANOTHER 60 DAYS OF THIS!" My protestations were immediately drowned out by the sounds of three women simultaneously breaking into an uncontrolled hysterical laughing fit as my term of slavery servicing the debt just got extended.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoGaius8666 I love your writing style, I can feel the frustration of the main character.
I love that the situation builds and the guy finds himself trapped with nothing but embarrassing options.
I do have a minor little thing that bugged me, and again it really didn't hurt the story in any way, but it just stood out enough to detract from the fantastic tale. The Salvation Army does not buy used clothing, they sell it. People donate their used clothes, they get a receipt for taxes, and then the Salvation Army sells those clothes to people with lower incomes.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoDecent story. Kind of glosses over the details and speeds through his descent, but overall good plot. There needs to be a part 2 where his humiliation and submission is gradually expanded. Maybe they buy him actual clothes for going out in public and running errands. So possibly actual chastity would be used. They have an empty/unused room, so maybe a new tenant - from his past (perhaps a former co-worker he had a crush on). Or maybe a man who gets to do all the things with the ladies that he never got to. And I agree with KidG1000. The ex should be invited back to enjoy the fall of her ex ... Maybe including her new man.
gentleone58almost 8 years agoI liked the story and was at first not into it as it was focusing on his bad luck, no job, no girl friend, no car, no money. But it did turn around when he was left with nothing and became the slave boy. I do however think that it was him that was had, not the women at the end as he had payed his dues and now he was indebted again and they presented to him or mounted him, he did not attach them. Yes he got off after suffering but he was had, not the girls.
