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Click here"Good girl." He said. He thrusted his finger inside of her forcefully as his tongue skillfully played with her clit. Her climax was building quickly, and she screamed for more. She finally let go, and she began to relax. William felt her insides clutching onto his finger, pulsing. He felt accomplished, being the first man to ever make her feel that way, for being the first one to give her that pleasure.
Lilly laid there, ashamed. She brought her arm across her eyes and she started weeping. For the purity that was lost, for her inability to restrain herself, for allowing herself to be controlled, and for liking every moment of it. She felt William's arms around her, bringing her face close against his chest.
She opened her eyes, sniffling. His arms felt nice. Her gaze was brought to the window. Outside was the beautiful garden that she loved so much. She closed her eyes, realizing that it was already night. The last thing she remembered before drifting off to sleep was the sound of William's voice.
"I'm sorry," he said. "I couldn't control myself."
same repetitive content
he broke her hymen with his fingures the biggest turnoff
am sure by the next chapter there would be equally not so sexy anal rutting and next he would share her with his friends completing her conditioning training grooming oh yeah you are going to add nipple or clit clamps ,some spanking ,whipping,some humiliation for breaking her
she would be transformed from naive virgin to alley whore by our glorified noncon prince
aint i right?
Need some more background on Lilly, but it was good. I was interested...I'm not really cool with the half rape thing unless one party is slightly coerced into wanting it and in the end don't regret it which she did...so not my forte, but other than that pretty good.
It has definite potential and I look forward to reading the next chapter, but you could use a good editor to clean it up a bit. Try the volunteer editors for the site!
I hope you will continue the story. Its very engaging, well written and has a hidden romance flavor to it.