All Comments on 'Shemale Surprise'

I want some cock in my ass fucking me hard and coming together. I came several times with my dildo vibrator in my ass as I was reading this story. Where is my Mia?

I want a real cock deep inside and then cumming inside my mouth. Love It. I want, no I need more. I will find me a Shemale to suck and fuck.

Love this story. So we'll written. And very hot. Please continue with the story.

Loved this, so need a sequel

you are the best erotic writer, can't get enough of you

I have read your story a few times over the years. I cum a few times each time. Thank you. I have now had the experience of sucking cock and also anal cum from a cock fucking my boipussy with a man cock. I love a cock in me so much

The cum is so intense like no other.

This has the life to go on,Robert doing Mia

Mia doing Mary, All three going at it,and more characters coming in the story

Absolutely in love with them,someone introduce me to Mia,,,

Am I the only one that would love to read a follow-up which begins with mia and carrie then works around to mary

I would love to try this out.

Once those pretty, pretty feet went to the dashboard I was severely hooked. Now, if I could only get tied down!

Ticklishsoles

I would love to have a shemale suck her cock then make me wear nylon's and female panties under my regular clothes

I wish I was a shemale’s submissive slut. Sucking her cock licking her ass, then she fucks my ass with her hot yummy tranny cock!

I totally enjoyed it to the point that I began to fantasize of being on the receiving of a big juicy dick, leaking warm tastey pre-cum. Being fucked by the most beautiful & lovely woman who just happens to have a dick beneath those la perla panties is just so sexy.

Before receiving any dick, I'd like to get ready for her by taking a nice hot scescented bath, plus I'd shave my legs, including all body hair. So I'd be perfumed & silky to her touch. Wich would bring us both pleasurable sensations as we touched & caressed each other.

But first I would love to wrap up her gift by stepping into a sexy pair of panties then sensuously bring up my legs until they kissed my pantied behind, after reaching for my garterbelt and fastening it from behind. I'd sit on the edge of my bed and begin the beautiful feminan ritual of gently slipping on my nylon stockings by lifting my left leg, with toes pointed, I start rolling my nylon up my leg. Passing my ankle, then calve until finally reaching my upper thigh and attaching it to the garters (Repeating the lovely ritual with my other leg). Once my nylons are properly on love to step into a pair beautiful black high heels & go in front of the mirror to admire the lovely process as it moves towards beautiful femininity. I then pick out a sexy black underwire lace bra, putting my arms through the sholder I bring it up & hook it up from behind like a lady should.

Now I decide what I'm going to put on, should I wear a dress or skirt with matching blouse? As I'm looking through my closet I choose a beautiful & very sexy pencil skirt in black and a beautiful gray silk blouse. After stepping into my pencil skirt & buttoning up the blouse I finally go over to the vanity and apply my makeup and in the end adding a very sexy, yet feminan shade of pink lipstick.

Now that I'm ready, I begin to wonder how's she going to fuck me & for how long ? Also how hung and thick she is has me eager to find out.

Why don't we start a movement? I love your dirty mind! And I want to be Robert.

your story made my old dick stand up and take notice. I have sucked another man's dick but never ass fucked... I really enjoyed sucking him off.. Then my wife joined us and as he had his dick in her pussy I was sucking on her clit and his dick at the same time. Your story brought back memories... Don't stop now !!!!!!!

I'm sure that your fans and followers are always sending you ideas to turn into stories or asking you to write sequels to ones you've already written, but I hope you hear me out when I say you need to write another chapter to Shemale Surprise. The anonymous comment entitled "Line...", while missing the emotional point of the story, does raise the legitimate question of the aftermath of the events described. A story exploring the lies that have been exposed and the new roles and relationships that must evolve for the marriage to continue. While the emotional tone might be difficult to write, the lusty fun and revelations this could lead to are something I'd love to read.

Think about it?

Would really like to read the second part with so many things going on in the story there's lots od idea's for a good sequel

Shemale Surprise part 2 please. I REALLY want to see Mia follow through on her threats/promises.

Love this story I couldn’t stop jacking off . I’ve never sucked a cock but I want Mia’s cock in my mouth my ass where ever she wants.. give us chapter 2 please

I want her cock in my ass and then I want to swallow her loads of cum. Love that cock.

Making straight guys wanna suck cock is what you do best Jasmine I know I’m straight and your stories make me wanna eat dick

Hey anonymous straight guy? Love to get together with you we could read a story or two from this great author and you could suck my cock bitch lmao I’m gay but always willing to let a so called straight guy live out his fantasy sucking my dick but your gonna have to eat my sweet ass first 😘 Jasmine you really do mess with these straight guys but a guy like me has just what they want

You leave Us hagin like this.. I Wanna know what happened.. this is or was getting really good.. DAMN that was Hottt..

Loved the story and it would be wonderful to see it from Mary's point of view also.

Please give us more on this story! Like a part 2 and a from Mary side

Like a lot of men, he talks a good game. But when she forces him to his knees in the elevator (which I don't think he allows her to do in the first place) and shows him her cock, I think he stands up and tells her, firmly, that nothing further is going to happen. And that when he gets home he's going to have a talk with his wife. Because if she's cheated on their marriage already, then said marriage may be over. Fantasy is one thing, reality is another. Guys may think girls sucking face with another girl is a hot idea, but when it comes down to actually doing it, no man wants his wife comparing his kissing to a woman's kissing. So I didn't believe for a minute that he allows Mia to do anything more than talk to him. Add to that the fact he was an anal virgin and your description of Mia ass raping him would have left him with a torn, bruised and bleeding sphincter muscle that would have required hospitalization to repair and this whole story goes down the drain. I find it much more believable that if Mia had continued to taunt him he would have punched her lights out. Badly thought out drivel.

1 star

WOW !

As a married man that has allowed my wife to sleep with women and in return she has allowed me to sleep with trans women this story is incredible and VERY believable!

Absolutely any man with this fantasy confronted with a sexually aggressive trans woman is going to submit. THAT'S the fantasy.

Also, if your partner is experienced the first time is, at worst, uncomfortable. Once you get used to something in there you can get pretty rough and it feels good.

Bravo sir, looking forward to more!

I thought this was very good! Instead of making the husband look like a helpless idiot like many stories do, you wrote him as a willing participant. I thought it was very good!

I thought this was a very hot story and was stroking the whole time I was reading. Some have said it was unreal, but as another said, its fiction. Others said it was too obvious that Mia was a shemale and yes I knew that pretty early in the story. The surprise for me (and it was a nice surprise) was that Mary had set the whole thing up. I was sure that it was mainly Mia's idea, and Mary went along with it and helped it happen.

For those that found it unbelievable that a straight guy would suck and get fucked. A couple of years ago I never thought I'd ever touch another cock, but since then I have stroked and sucked cocks on several occasions. That part of the story is quite believable.

Like many others, I eagerly await a sequel. I won't suggest where it should go from here, that is your decision. But I've liked several of the suggestions I read from others. I will say that personally, I'm not interested in a psychological analysis of their marriage. This is an erotic story site, thats what most people are looking for on here.

Was quite sexy, up until you made her a mean bitch. Also, i hate the word faggot. Its really hate speach. By the way if hes a faggot the so is she. I dont think a trans woman would call anyone a faggot.

that got my man clitty so hard! I would have let myself cum a few times, but then I wouldn't want to read more.

I have been having fantasies of that happening to me with the only difference being me forced to dress like a slut with bright red lipstick (my weekness) but I have tried & tried but can't find a she male that would like this virgin ass! Oh well I can dress and fantasize cause I'll never get that lucky!!!

It would be cool to hear from the wife’s perspective of her encounter with her lesbian experience more

Who didn't know she was a shemale from the very start, and if its as big as I'm told that ass fucking wouldn't let your faggot ass fart!!!

Nice, I like the dialogue, especially in the car.

Love your stories they are a total turn on I'm hard most of the time thinking of playing with Mia only I'm the dom but we all get it in the end keep writing

Loved your story mmmmmm.

Why are so many trans women written as such mean cunts? She had the perfect opportunity to seduce him and break his cherry gently, and he would love it and love her. But no, she rams her big cock (always a huge cock, mind you) right in and pounds him hard. A virgin coundnt handle that. Its a quasi rape situation. And why the hate speech? Cocksucker use a a deragatory term, faggot, ass slut. Ugh! Ruined it for me.

@Anon its almost like the story wasn't written just for you.

Waste of time reading.

Love the story! Would like to hear from wife’s perspective. Maybe how the flirting and teasing all started her down this path!

I loved it so much i wish that something like that would happen with me

Would like to knowhow thing went after there weekend and the plans the she male had made and how that turned out.

A lot of criticisms of this story boil down to "I don't agree with the characters' morals, therefore I find it implausible/unsexy." This ignores the fact that erotic stories, for the most part, are designed precisely to show people acting outside normal boundaries. If an average person's day consisted of fucking the first random attractive person they encountered after leaving the house, we wouldn't write stories about it. It would probably become a staple of stand-up comedy:

"Don't you hate it when the person you bang on the way to work ends up being the least attractive person you meet all day? And there's no way to put 'em off without pissing them off! I mean, every so often you'll meet those beautiful people who can afford to be picky, and they're like, 'I'm saving it for Happy Hour!' Me, I'm just hoping I can make it through my thirties before I have to take Viagra every morning....Isn't that the worst? You feel pathetic, she feels unattractive, and it's been scientifically proven you can only say the words, 'It's not your fault' about 20 times in your life before suicide starts to seem like a valid life choice!"

So no one really wants REALISTIC erotica; we just want the words to make a movie in our heads that holds together for a few minutes at least. Personally, I couldn't buy that a man who's THAT obsessed with "she-males" (I know many have problems with that term, and I respect that, but it's perfectly believable that the main character would use it) wouldn't IMMEDIATELY start looking for little "clues" as soon as they met up. To me, that's what kept me from identifying with him, which meant I really didn't get into the story. But it didn't offend me in the slightest.

And anyone who can't guess that a story in the "Transsexuals and Crossdressers" category, that starts out introducing a married couple, will have extra-marital sex at some point, doesn't quite grasp the basics of this whole 'erotic story' business.

I really loved the story. Definitely a fantasy of mine, sort of.

Don’t agree with giving up the wife or any plans that were made not including me in the conversation.

Also, I hate the word faggot. This is for a gay man. Our guy is not gay. And the deal the wife made is unfair. She is with multiple people and he is with just one. She gets to be fucked by Mia but does he get to fuck Angela and her friends? A long talk is needed between husband and wife before anything else happens.

Yeah I get it it’s just a story, just my thoughts.

I need a part 2 in a hurry!

I dream of sucking huge she make yummy juicy cock

Wonderful, sensual story, wishing I was Robert! My clittie is dripping.

It always continuously makes me so hard to realize that I definitely could be turned into a cocksucking faggot without any resistance.

Decent story, but by the end I really disliked Mia. She started out seeming like a cool girl, but by the end it was clear she was actually a manipulative sociopath... I think it would have been a much more fun story if she hadn't turned out to be such a bad person.

Wonderful. I xould like to be the bitch. Suck the shemale before bending and take her big cock in,my sluttyass

Solène the bitch

Wish I was that cock whore and cum slut.

Sillliwilli@gmsil.com

Too much use of derogatory name calling during sex was a but of a turn off. Very predictable from the start.

One of the best, well-written stories I've had the pleasure of reading on Literotica. Altho the shenanigans get increasingly unlikely and complex, that's what fantasy is for. A real pleasure to read, thank you!

Got me so hard I stuck a vacuum cleaner handle up my ass and had a prostate orgasm. Then I stroked my cock and cum in my hand and swallowed every drop

Great story! Who wouldn't want to be dominated by a gorgeous shemale? And while his wife is getting the lesbian ride of her life too? Excellent incorporation

Everything you write drives me wild, lol.

This story was so hot and had me hard the entire time! Will there be follow ups? Damn I hope so.

Love all of your story. Would love for you to add to this like what happens when they all get together

If there was ever a story that deserves to be continued, this is it!

This one made me create a new library titled read again. Thank you

Beyond awesome, absolutely delicious story. Please continue!

I love dominate shemail stories, I too should try

Loved all the twists and turns.

Loved it, a great fantasy to have. Part 2?

Wonderful story, very erotic., no it was damn horny/ I wish I was in Robert's position

Amazing..I hope there will be a 2nd part to this wonderful story!

loved the story please have part 2 with all the people Mary, Mia, Carrie, Angela and her mother while Robert watches

From the tons of comments, I see that there are a lot of kinky perverts like me out there!

Your story is totally HOT, one of my absolutely favorites and ticked all of my boxes in one way or another; shemales, nylons, nasty sex talk, oral sex and anal sex!

As much as I wish I were, I'm not a shemale. I'm a totally gay crossdresser and a bottom. I'm not, like in your story, interested in girls and I don't live with anyone. Although we don't live together, I do have a steady boyfriend.

There is something about nylons, especially pantyhose, that makes me sooo horny! It's not just how they look or how they feel as a silky and slippery dress rubs against my pantyhose clad legs, there is just something about them, a nonphysical feeling that can't be put into words, that just screams sex!

Like you said in your story, sucking cock comes so naturally, it's just instinctual. I love to suck my boyfriend's cock, even after we are all fucked out and he can't get it up again.

I love it when my boyfriend talks dirty like that while we fuck. It drives me into a sexual frenzy when he tells me how he loves his little cock sucking sissyfag, cum slut. It drives me to a sexual frenzy when when we are fucking and he tells me how he is going fill my cunt with his sperm and knock me up.

Absolutely Great story. I love it.

Quite convoluted...Mary going down on a hairy cunt got my attention...personal fave...very doubtful her teen mistress(es-?) has a muffin

Wildly hot please continue

Every time I read this I CAN’T stop visualizing how awesome an experience that would be!

Your a excellent writer! Even the things I probably wouldn’t do, I was persuaded that could with the scenario you painted… very liberal wife.

One really good story, lets have more. jildijow@outlook.com

The story was ok until the humiliation and slave and mistress talk came out and now how his wife is a sub to a friend friends daughter and Mia, just to much the fun flirting in the car was good the teasing great but the couple becoming subs is over used

Very good.. as always. I loved it. it so strengthens my fantasies.

Fucking hot,I so want you to have your way with me.lol

Wonderful story! About a third of the way through, I realized that I had read it several years before but apparently did not rate it or leave comments. On the one hand, I apologize for not commenting the first time around. But on the other hand, I am glad that I didn't because I feel better prepared now than before.

I recently came across a quote that goes something like, "If you want to avoid criticism. do nothing, say nothing and be nothing." While I do not wish to bash your critics, I mention this quote to support and encourage you to continue writing and posting your superb stories.

Robert didn't just give in to Mia out of the blue. He had read shemale porn and fantasized about sex with one, including sucking cock. Mary, his wife, was aware of his infatuation and set him up with Mia, a friend she knew to be transsexual. In addition, he was aware of her desire for a lesbian encounter. They had even joked half-seriously about their fantasies coming to fruition.

With this prior conditioning, it is not surprising to me that he did not resist the unfolding agenda orchestrated by Mia.

Speaking of Mia, I see her in a different light than some others. Instead of a controlling, domineering bitch, I see her as a confident woman who knows what she wants and is determined to get it. While seemingly aggressive, she appears to have keen insight into the human psyche. These attributes give her the ability to get people to do her bidding. Just as she seduced strait-laced Carrie in a matter of minutes, she easily could have made any of Robert’s fawning male co-workers her bitch without much effort.

Finally, words like “faggot” and “sissy” are no longer seen as insulting or demeaning. Instead, they are now embraced with pride by those who identify with those labels. Robert was far from offended when called faggot by Mia. Instead, his arousal appeared to intensify as intended by Mia. Far from anger, he responded cheerfully by referring to her as “Mistress”.

Once again, this was a wonderfully, well-written story.

Incredible story. Couldn't stop reading. Can't believe how turned on by it I became. Makes me wonder if I would ever give in like Robert did. Unfortunately we'll probably never know.

So hot! Loved to Wrap my Lips around your Tip as you Cum! For a Sweet Release 👅👅💦

Extremely hot. And the wife set it up.

You are the very best writer on Literotica. Just the very best.

Wow!

Nooooo, I need more!!! Great story. Would love to see a 5, 6, and 7 to this.

WoW!! So incredibly fucking hot!! This is my dream, my fantasy!! I came soo much jerking off multiple times to this story & my cum tasted great too! The best part is that my 1st ex-wife is named Mia & I kept picturing her with a big, fat cum spewing cock.

Great fucking story silkstockingslover!! 😋🤓

My favorite story by far. I would do anything to see a video made from this story. It would be amazing!

Loved this story. Very sexy and hot. I also like shemales I never have been with one but I think I would do everything he did in this story..

Tom

Would have liked to see what happened after they all got back home.

I aspire to one day write stories a fraction this quality. So well tailored together.

My all time favourite story on this site. I've lost count of the number of times I've read it. I sincerely hope that you eventually write a sequel in which we see more of Mia dominating Robert and Mary.

I like it wish that was me in the story

Bi far the best, Hottest cock hardening story I have ever read.Thank you and please a sequel!

Baloney. Rape pure and simple. They'd both be in prison for a LONG time. You NEVER imagine that there would be any fallout from your characters actions.

This story is fucking hot!!! Now all I need is Mia's phone number !

Loved it hun

I need to be Mia’s bitch

Love it!