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I laughed. "You'll get no argument from me," I said. I turned onto my side facing the same direction as Wren, grabbed the blanket from the end of the bed and pulled it over us. I snuggled closely to her placing my cock up against her ass cheeks. It wasn't long before relaxation took control and I fell asleep, my arms wrapped around Wren.
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- COMMENTS
bshell47over 3 years agoThought you might add Natalie for a threesome.
Good for another chapter.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoA lot of it seems rushed, don't be afraid to take your time to flesh out each character. Go into detail about what they look like, or what they're wearing. Let each chapter have a reason for being written. Practice makes perfect, the more you write, the better you'll get. I most certainly want to see something happen with the siblings and the waitress.
Anonymousover 10 years agothe waitress part was strange and not needed and you just rushed into the sex. from the time they got home to the time they fucked should be spread out over weeks or months. you need to build it up not just jump in with no foreplay.
atkinsboiover 10 years agoI say forget the waitress and only have them sleep with eachother and focus on creating a deeper sense of romance between them
SusieJover 10 years agoI really enjoyed your story. The interaction with the waitress brought out some of your sister's sexuality. The sister and brother go well together.
